Rivers of my Face

My face is a map
That traces, so accurately
The journey
Of my life
Like old roads
Carved out of hope
Trying to lead somewhere
Now tired and worn
Always remaining
Beyond repair
Fading into the past
Before the journey
Had barely travelled
Lightly trodden paths
Often fondly remembered
For that one single moment
When they crossed
Each other’s destiny
They left such little trace
But measured together
Provide so many memories
Of long lost desires

The ravines of past loves
So very deep
Etched from sadness
As ever growing rifts
Drifting further apart
Wrenched from pain
And scarred with sorrow
With impassable rivers
Born of tears
That had bled
From eyes
That had seen
Futility

But hope
Is an emotion
Where desires
Can see further
Than futility
For this map
Has one last space
To be fulfilled
And complete
The journey of life
And when that final river
Crosses my face
And flows
Into nothingness
All I will ever know
Is it will never
Be as deep
As yours
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Dec 2013
About this poem:
At my age this is fairly accurate. I am on a sabbatical from my novel because I need to write some new poetry, not much, but one now and again to refresh my warped mind.

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trurorob
Thanks Red
Rob
trurorob
Thanks Purplenails
Rob
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Cheers Jesse
Rob
trurorob
Thank you Odette, hope you are well, be nice to see you posting.
Rob
trurorob
Cheers Pink, hope you are getting better.
Rob
trurorob
Thank you Ladyjewel.
Rob
minkybee
Well, your warped mind is in fine step .. Brilliant, profound poem .. Thanks so much xx
trurorob
Cheers Jim
Rob
trurorob
Cheers MM
Rob
TAR_734
"At my age this is fairly accurate. I am on a sabbatical from my novel because I need to write some new poetry, not much, but one now and again to refresh my warped mind."...I too, am on sabbatical for the same reason!...ennui, writer's block...not sure; but, since I have been on this site (a few days) and encountered so many wonderful writers (you, most admirably included)My creative juices are beginning to flow again.
So, trurorob, I would just like to introduce myself: "Robert" (pseudonym, "Sinclair"), and thank you, albeit unbeknownst to you, for your enlightening tutelage in this art, and thank you, as well, for the pleasure of your works.
Robert (Sinclair)handshake
rapturecapture
Hi Rob

I have read this poem a good few times now... I just adore it from start to finish...



Thank you for sharing

Martina xxxhug bouquet wine angel wave
trurorob
Thank you Minkybee
Rob
trurorob
Cheers Robert.
Rob
reguiny2006
HELLO, How wonderful, the poetry of life, that embraces life.

Phil.cheers
trurorob
Thank you Martina.
Rob
trurorob
Cheers Phil.
Rob
Ahyra
Wow, "chapeau" :) So nice to read you Mister. Great poem teddybear
trurorob
Thank you Missy, glad you liked.
Rob
Earlgreytea
[For this map
Has one last space
To be fulfilled
And complete
The journey of life
And when that final river
Crosses my face
And flows
Into nothingness
All I will ever know
Is it will never
Be as deep
As yours]

Wow! What an allegory! I will not besmirch it with trite comment except to venture to say:- Reading your writings dear Rob, is like drinking a very special aged malt whiskey, mellow, alive, satisfying, leaving you hungering for more...
wine
trurorob
Very kind comment Earl, thanks.
Rob
Africannah
I remember learning poetry in high school but was all focused on Shakespeare .... After reading this ONE....wish i could go back to High school and take Poetry lessons once more but Only if its Yours...
Woow !!! Your peoms will make Kids in my Country understand the real meaning to life .
God bless you Rob .teddybear
honeybear3000
so your face is a road map? rob you still look handsome to me rob lol i guess what ever it takes to wright the good stuff you got it. i like the way your words connect nice!
honeybear3000
so your face is a road map? rob you still look handsome to me rob lol i guess what ever it takes to wright the good stuff you got it. i like the way your words connect nice!
trurorob
Thank you Africanner, most kind.
Rob
godsprincess
It is amazing to look back over your life to see where you started and where and how you wound up currently in your life. A lot of road trips and curves and no AAA to help you along the way but our Creator. His plan for us is amazing.

Great write! Thanks for sharing.

Kathy teddybear
cafetwo2010
Always a pleasure to revisit your work
Rob.
Cafe
trurorob
Cheers Kathy
Rob
sophiasummer
As many Goldies arewine
trurorob
Thanks Christian, most kind.
Rob
morgen90210
Your warped mind sure does have some fantastic rhymes
I really enjoy this from a guy who is wise
it comes with experiences
it comes with time

wonderful
Happychatty1
Very impressed by this poem...over it applause heart beating
Happychatty1
Love it applause heart beating
Happychatty1
Wow what a poem...loved it !
A lived in face as they say..whoever they are applause applause applause
trurorob
Thanks Soph, hope you are well.
Rob
southmiami4321online today!
Sometimes our face hides away roads, deep and lost. Yet those strong wrinkles are years of laughter and brightens our looks. When we put together our visual mirror it's life itself.
Enjoyed your read.Thanks for sharing. SM
trurorob
Cheers Morgen
Rob
trurorob
Thanks Happychatty, three times over!!
Rob
Happychatty1
Your welcome Rob 2nd comment was to correct my first 3rd was to send it back round for others to enjoy lol wave
candykid
A truly outstanding piece of writing/poetry. This is the first write that I have read after a few months of vacation, and I feel it a great piece.
"All I will ever know
Is it will never
Be as deep
As yours."

I find that artistic statement beautiful in so many ways, it exudes a sense of humility that is expertly hidden, even if not intentional by the author. Great to read from you brother.
trurorob
No need happychatty to post corrections, I got what you meant, though cheers!
Rob
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