love

by ShoelaceQuezon city, Metro Manila, Philippines

Dec 2013 633 Views 4 comments

love

A love of someone I cannot defend with him its changes A loyalty of someone i cannot defend with him It will vanish But ......... A love of mine I can hold it for the rest of my life His loyalty I can precious I can fell it But...... My heart is crying A love of mine is gone now my pet is passaway

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Posted: Dec 2013

About this poem:

my heart is crying because my pet is gone after i submit it i will close of my laptop i dont want crying crying in front

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Comments (4)

HotrodLarrysSt. Joseph, Missouri USADec 19, 2013

If your pet died, Just Realize that is another one that YOU Survived..... so just for a smile!

Shoelace is a Very Unique User Name!

BellaNoraMobile, Alabama USADec 19, 2013

Shoelace, your comparison of unpredictable vs. loyal and unconditional love is simple and profound.

I understand the heartbreak the passing of your pet can evoke. Please know your loss is felt with sadness here too.

I still grieve the passing of my 16 year old pet that died last year, but the ache of her absence lessens with time.

Your poem in memory is lovely, thank you for sharing it with us.

beautifulyouNew York, USADec 19, 2013

i'm sorry for the loss of your pet shoelace,
deep peace, unto you

ShoelaceOPQuezon city, Metro Manila PhilippinesMar 20, 2014

thank you my friend out their hot rod Larrys Bella Nora and beautifulyou i only relieve today for my heart crying for the loss of my pet its just like child to me when am sleeping his beside my bed when am eating his beside me now his gone no more companion beside me thank you for all your coment