” Animal birthday party”

“This is so unfair!”
“I’ve no place here.”
Said the tortoise to the hare.
“Sadly things are so clear”.
“Even if my passion flares”
“I can never reach speed of mares”.

“Who cares?”
“Silly turtle wipe your tears”
“This is a game of musical chairs”
“No need for surrender’s flag to be hoist”
"om nom nom nom, this grass is so moist"
“Here have some, be merry and rejoice”
Said the hare to the tortoise…

Now he wasn't sulky.
The mood was hearty.
Everyone was dandy.
In the "animal birthday party."
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Posted: Dec 2013
About this poem:
Poem #94 : Tried to come up a poem for a children's book"
Not my style, i'm more of a dark writer! But hey, this is my attempt, tell me what you think?

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Comments (2)

mcradloff
I have a friend who is a hare, always running here and there and never seeming to finish anything. I have a car that his dad hit at the end of September, still waiting for him to fix it. I like the idea of an animal party. Emo Phillips has a song called Animal Square Dance.frog bunny santa waving
IvoryPetals
i'll be sure to listen to it! just wanted to try something different in my poetry! ty for reading!cheers
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