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Spartacus2012

by Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi, USA

Dec 2013 558 Views 16 comments

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Author: Spartacus2012

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When I think of you
I am between
sleeping and awake
where I remember

dreaming of
you...

I have seen
the best of you
worst of you
still

I choose
both...

You know me
the one me
I know you
all of you

tame me
tenderly...

Then I shall be
unique to you
and like flowers
in a field

We shall be
side by side
in beautiful hues...

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Dec 2013

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Comments (16)

Serenity4two

Serenity4twoDonegal, IrelandDec 29, 2013

Hello Ken

one of the best indicators of a real and lasting love is when that special someone in your life sees you at your" worst ", at your lowest ebb and still remains by your side - who will be there for you always through life's up's and downs .
That is the rare and special love which we all strive for.
Beautiful poetry dear man - F

mimzy333

mimzy333unknown, Washington USADec 29, 2013

very special poem ken, your love is luckey to have you.

fjamesj9701

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USADec 30, 2013

Moving piece my friend, excellent words and imagery ….Jesse

Spartacus2012

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USADec 30, 2013

Thanks for visiting Fiona.

Regards,

Ken

Spartacus2012

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USADec 30, 2013

Thank you Mimzy!..Cheers..

Ken

darkhorse555

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandDec 30, 2013

deep beautiful romantic piece dear friend

Spartacus2012

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USADec 30, 2013

Much appreciated Jesse..

Ken

sundayrose1

sundayrose1san francisco, California USADec 30, 2013

We shall be
side by side
in beautiful hues...

This is a very beautiful piece describing your thoughts Ken.

Have a Happy New Year.

SR

Poetnumber1

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoDec 30, 2013

Beautiful lines Ken. Heartfelt words penned succinctly.

Spartacus2012

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USADec 30, 2013

Thank you Liam..

Ken

Spartacus2012

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USADec 30, 2013

Thank you S.R.,

Regards,

Ken

Spartacus2012

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USADec 30, 2013

Thanks poet buddy..Hope all is well..

Regards,

Ken

twinself

twinself..., Majjistral MaltaDec 31, 2013

Wow ...beautiful. Simple yet deep. It reminds me of Sting, and Fields of Gold.

Spartacus2012

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USADec 31, 2013

Thank you twin for the visit and lovely song link..

Regards,

Ken

kle76am

kle76amnew york, New York USADec 31, 2013

"I know all of you.....tame me tenderly....we shall be side by side" OMG what a great romantic piece. I am just loving it..

Spartacus2012

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USADec 31, 2013

Thank you kle,
Happy New Year!

Regards,

Ken

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