sweet gentleness

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Dec 2009 635 Views 7 comments

sweet gentleness.

Author: Unknown

i dream of marios,
his essence all enveloping,
without knowledge of reality,
so soothing the sensation,
I'm loved and I'm elated.

RUDE AWAKING to the present,
i feel his loss anew,
i rejecting,then excepting,
reminisce the time i rose,
from nightmare to his endless love,
and yearn...

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Dec 2009

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Comments (7)

IvoryPetals

IvoryPetalsArima, Borough of Arima Trinidad and TobagoDec 11, 2009

Nicely penned

tomboygirl

tomboygirlOPlarnaca, Larnaca CyprusDec 11, 2009

thankyou,this is the first time ive shown anyone my poetry,nice to have some feed back!

momo70

momo70nicosia, Nicosia CyprusDec 13, 2009

you are not alone!

Earlgreytea

EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusMar 3, 2010

Having lost my beloved to cancer, I know exactly what you're going through...

Happygolucky4u

Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida USAMar 3, 2010

Wow you shared wonderfully. What a way with words. Short but profound.

Thank you for sharing.

paloma66

paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandMar 3, 2010

Lovely way of expressing...I know how it feels...God bless you.

tomboygirl

tomboygirlOPlarnaca, Larnaca CyprusMar 23, 2010

earl grey-so sorry for your loss.

thankyou ladies for the comments...

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