Ramparts adorn the castle walls Amidst them slotted turrets Making for a grim facade Inside a moat that repelled many Fortess of all it guards In its depths a dungeon Captives were placed there A home to torture chambers The stains of blood darkly visible Inferno pit in the centre Over which people were hung alive No mercy given here to foes Screams heard for miles around
Whew!...this is what I call "Imagery"! You have instilled a fear to be the foe of the person owning "the castle walls"... Very expressive, exceptional acrostic! Nicely done "Teach"... Robert
steve1223adelaide, South Australia AustraliaJan 22, 2014
Beautifully done
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJan 22, 2014
Good acrostic Linda. Felt inspired to write one 1 day again by yours.
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You have instilled a fear to be the foe
of the person owning "the castle walls"...
Very expressive, exceptional acrostic!
Nicely done "Teach"...
Robert
TY
SR