Yesterday--------- CHALLENGE

Yesterday is gone, too late for regrets
All memories of the past locked away
My hopes and fears joining them
Troubles I have had like most, happiness
Seemed to be just a dream from the past
So few of them have survived, once
Far from here I was carefree until you went
Away to war, the news came, lost in action

Now I dwell in the past with locked memories
It seems no point when I no longer can share them
Looks of love from others all around me
As if to taunt me, reminding me of you
Though it is a lovely day my heart weeps a single tear
They're one of many that never manages to fall
Here in my eyes they remain burning hot scalding me
To be with you once more just once to hold you
Stay my heart screams, do not go, do not leave me

Oh how can this be, such terrible pain rips at me
I hear a knock on the door and he is there saying
Believe in me my love, I told you I would return
In your heart you knew I was alive, I am back safe
Yesterday is over, the war won and our life moves on
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jan 2014
About this poem:
a challenge

Yesterday

Each of the words in the first verse are the first word in each line of your poem, so your poem should be laid out as below. Just fill in the rest of the words in each line with your own.
See my poem above if unsure. Have fun
Yesterday
All
My
Troubles
Seemed
So
Far
Away

Now
It
Looks
As
Though
They're
Here
To
Stay

Oh
I
Believe
In
Yesterday

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Comments (14)

nonsmoker
Very good, wine
Im going to give it a go. thumbs up
darkhorse555
beautifully crafted lindaangel wine
TAR_734
Linda, I love this!heart beating
OK "Teach", I accept the challenge,
I'm sure it will not compare to this work,
but I'm going to have fun in the effort!help applause
When I finish, I'll post it here in "Poem Comment:"
peace
Robertbouquet
teddybear
TAR_734
Linda, I must add,
"This is an "EXCEPTIONAL" Piece!wow
Robertwine
teddybear
nonsmoker
Hey shadow wave
Do we have to use The song "Yesterday" or can we use any song ?
Ravensgold
Great piece Shadow,....so well put togetherwave wine
TAR_734
revision posted on Poet's Corner.
Robertteddybear
shadow1950
great nonsmoker welcome abroad hug wine kiss
shadow1950
ty Liam give it a go hug wine kiss
shadow1950
Yesterday please nonsmoker hug kiss wine
shadow1950
ty Robert for poem and comments good poem hug wine kiss
shadow1950
hi Raven give it a go too lol ty dear hug wine kiss
Poetnumber1
Interesting challenge Linda. Is there a deadline or it can be done at any given period? This was well written within the limits of it all Linda.teddybear
shadow1950
no deadline dear MM in your own time just let me know when you post it ty so much I did find it a challenge lol
hug wine kiss purple heart teddybear bouquet angel
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