intricate protection.

i am the bud,fallen down,from the tree,
i may never open,for you to see,
petals tightly coiled,hiding,all that could be,
intricate protection,from the world,that i see,
i am the bud,fallen down,from the tree,
i may never open,for you to see,
drench my thirst,and put me in the light,
handle me so gentle,ill not have to fight,
for i am the bud,fallen down,from the tree,
striving,to open,for you to see.
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Posted: Dec 2009

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Comments (25)

IvoryPetals
This is a beautiful poem
tomboygirl
really?thankyou!
robert6963
all i can say is wow it's very beautiful
tomboygirl
thanks robert,i believe you are hopeless romantic :)
robert6963
you are very right
sabeel
dear poet tomboygirl,

really it is wonderfull poem. you have an inborn power to write.
go on.. poet...


thanks for the share..

sabeel.teddybear bouquet sad flower
tomboygirl
your welcome-will try lol
boyshchrm6
Lovely worded poem.
Great phrasing and flow.angel applause thumbs up peace
Andy1905
in the right conditions that bud will bloom into?? well the flower you already arewave
tomboygirl
exactly that lol..
Earlgreytea
Girl, as we say in Texas, you certainly have a way with words... Very evocative, it stirs the primeval psychie of the masculine spirit...
paloma66
Your poem tugs at the heart,well written,sad.We would like to see that bud opening and its blossoming beauty.angel bouquet thumbs up
trurorob
very nice poem my friend
rob
tomboygirl
wow thanks alot for the comments!

still striving though...dunno

teddybear
hedistuff
love it1 terrific...tom
empireroad
There you have it, Does provoke thought, a very clever yet simple write, a truly memorable Poem,

Well done and good for you Tommy.
tomboygirl
Thanks hedistuff.x

And thanks Empireroad for the interest and commentsteddybear
Ladybee42
coola boola TBG i am loving this, it's got something i can't put a finger on...conversing applause bouquet
tomboygirl
Thanks Ladybeehug
Redex
Nothing tomboyish about this poem it was wow!! realy a lovely readteddybear
tomboygirl
Thanks Redix,I guess I was showing my feminine,vulnerable side here huh!teddybear
freeatlast64847
Eight months and still sparking comments! Evocative and intriguing. Glad this bubbled back up, I missed it the first time through. Well done TBG! wine Bloom!
shalom67
Really a good poem,like the rhyming,you have a way with words.You seem to be blooming from the last time I viewed you here.God bless you.teddybear
paloma66
The beautiful bud is blooming now,drank in the sunshine and gave us a smile.Thank you I loved this.angel hug
tomboygirl
Freeatlast,Shalom,Paloma,thankyou very much for your kind commentsteddybear
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