Good Bye Forever, Darling

When sunlight full of my little room
I got your letter, darling
I dare not to open it
I know there must be a sword in the blue envelope

When the setting sunlight full of my little desk
I can't stand the attraction of your nice handwriting
I open the blue envelope with my trembling fingers

Those beautiful characters become lots of needles
pierce into my heart
Darling, my darling
Have you heard the sound of blood droping?

you regard my soft love words as nagging
you regard my deep love poems as hysteria
you regard my feelings as cheap mud....

But you are right, darling
you are always right in my heart
Goodbye forever darling

My love is too hot
your heart would be burnt by it
my love is too hot
you are too weak to stand it

Goodbye darling
Have your own life better
Goodbye darling
I also have my own life

......
life will go on and on
......
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Dec 2009
About this poem:
I had dumplings this evening,very delicious, too happy, so need something sad to balance my mind,lol. so find the old poem in my file and translate it into English. Hope you read it in high mood. lol
Thanks
Amenda

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Comments (9)

Amenda
I wonder if you have had Chinese dumplings?
it's very delicious indeed, it can also inspire you to write good poems or translate good poems. laugh
Believe of not, anyhow I've told the secret to you. laugh
Milanda
thumbs up applause nice one amenda bouquet I like it & thanks for sharing
boyshchrm6
Nice translation of
lovely poem. I have the
secret now Chinese Dumplings
and the balance of Ying and Yang.
Thanks Amenda!angel wine banana applause
jayjaywaiting
you balanced that out well amenda .... I think I will have some of those dumplings to help balnace me out lol

jayjay
Amenda
Thanks for commenting!handshake teddybear

This is a sad poem, which make me shed tears everytime when I read it...so should not read this kind of thing too often.
crying
Andy1905
nice poem but you need to cook us all chinese dumplings to appreciate the highs and lows you talk of lolrolling on the floor laughing
Amenda
ok, I'll prepare delicous dumplings for you all to celebrate your Christmas....I'll show you all my good technical on making dumplings.lollaugh

Thanks for commenting!teddybear
john0217
it is a beautiful burning sad poem think you
Amenda
Thanks for comment!
Hope you have a wonderful Christmas!!teddybear
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