Draped in her bed sheet The model stands her modesty hidden From prying eyes Draping her body her
Elegant curves Hidden but reavelling easing the eye of the beholder She lays Her forming curves
Gently resting her torsoed body Spreads herself ontop the table Her left leg gentley held crossed up right Here gaze held Proped by her arms She the watcher looks into their gaze
Her mind blank to the minds of the watchers Pens in hand they paint Cavtavating her form as one with the canvas and paint
a very descriptive story of a painter as much as the model...makes the reader feel the writer seem to have done this sort of thing to be able to vividly portray it in words...
mimzy333unknown, Washington USAJan 29, 2014
great poem
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKJan 29, 2014
Nice one Wayne.
beautifulyouNew York, USAJan 29, 2014
a really different kind of write wayne, nice job hon
Comments (7)
Thanks for the share.
SR
nice job hon
I enjoyed the deviation
from the normal perspective,
and the excellent imagery.
Good Work!
Robert