Her beauty is rare like a black pearl embedded in an oyster An innocent smile nestles on her angelic face. Her chocolate skin is soft like cotton. Her mahogany eyes glisten in the sun like stars sitting on the night’s sky. Her voice is soothing like the tranquility of nature. Her kisses are sweet like nectar, but intoxicating like wine. Her grace is one only angels possess. My heart holds on to the reins with a firm grip and rides on the back of the stallion of infatuation steering me further down this path of love. Though I maybe lost in lust, but I will follow the beacon of hope to escape the shadow of darkness. Though our friendship is in its infancy, it is creeping like a child, in time it will learn to walk. She gives birth to a passion that is trap behind closed doors, away from open eyes, it resides in the depths of my soul, where it is silenced by this coward heart of mine. If my love was written upon the scroll in the heavens above, then she could gaze at the night’s sky and decipher the secret that my heart keeps. She seized my heart captive, rendering me to be a slave to love. For now I’m a prisoner confined in a penitentiary of love...
IvoryPetals, "Her beauty is rare like a black pearl embedded in an oyster An innocent smile nestles on her angelic face. Her chocolate skin is soft like cotton. Her mahogany eyes glisten in the sun like stars sitting on the night’s sky. Her voice is soothing like the tranquility of nature. Her kisses are sweet like nectar, but intoxicating like wine." This is some of the most beautiful verse I have ever had the pleasure in reading..."INTOXICATING"! Great Write! Sinclair
rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandFeb 12, 2014
Hi IvoryPetals
I loved reading your wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing
Martina xxx
IvoryPetalsOPArima, Borough of Arima Trinidad and TobagoFeb 12, 2014
ty! i started writing a love story years ago and i never finished it, because my inspiration wasnt there anymore. this poem was given birth in 2004 when i was madly in love with my x. when i read this poem, it makes me wonder how someone could make you feel like this and then ruin your whole world after. Guess being in love comes with a price!!!
sundayrose1san francisco, California USAFeb 12, 2014
Absolutely ivoryPetals. And now it is so natural for me to be hurt over and over again, and still i don't learn but then what are we here for if not being hurt? once in a while?
Comments (5)
"Her beauty is rare like a
black pearl embedded in an oyster
An innocent smile nestles on her angelic face.
Her chocolate skin is soft like cotton.
Her mahogany eyes glisten in the sun
like stars sitting on the night’s sky.
Her voice is soothing like the tranquility
of nature. Her kisses are sweet like nectar,
but intoxicating like wine."
This is some of the most beautiful verse I have ever had the pleasure in reading..."INTOXICATING"!
Great Write!
Sinclair
I loved reading your wonderful poem.
Thank you for sharing
Martina xxx
thanks for the share, again.
SR