" Love's Lament "

A poem of Love I ne'er can sing,
Two hearts depart in broken bond,
Lost in the flutter of an Angels wing,
Her teardrops fell on a Love so fond.

In sad reflection I reminisc,
Of lustful days in long meadows unseen,
Our lips locked hard in fervent kiss,
We danced like butterflies on a sea of green.

Caution flung into the warm Summer breeze,
The broken chains of passion unleashed,
Bulging veins on swollen lips the moment was seized,
This Love never end...our spent bodies beseech.

Alas....our Paradise not destined to last,
We loved & lost and cried in vain,
Unending sorrow of a Love now past,
I stare across the meadow and taste the pain.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Feb 2014
About this poem:
The corner has some great love poems,
Unfortunately for me this is as close
as I can get.

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Comments (21)

Redex
This is great you have done so well.peace yay
I too have tried the love poems but alas attemps go in binmoping So I am now content in the reading of them.teddybear
Mizzy4
I think you have to be blinded
to write the nice ones.
Comment appreciated! Mick.
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lindsyjonesonline today!
this is so beautiful my dear Mick. just so explosive with painful experience in love.

beautifully expressed my friend.

LJbouquet
beautifulyou
Mizzy,
this is a beautifully expressed love lament
ty for sharing it with us rose
mimzy333
well mick you must have been blinded when you wrote this one because its absolutly wonderful.
TAR_734
Close enough for me to feel your "Great Loss"!!!blues
Wonderful work Mick!...I was wishing I was on that
"sea of green" with a very special someone!laugh heart wings heart beating grin
Robethug
cheers

tip hat
bowing
Mizzy4
Thanks so much Lindsey,
Much appreciated......Mick.
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Mizzy4
Thanks BY, really glad you liked.
Mick...........hug gift
Mizzy4
AAH ! Mimzy, that's a lovely compliment.
I was blind just once !
Mick. hug hug bouquet
Mizzy4
Cheers Robert, your comments are
always welcome.
Kind regards Mick.
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txbreeze134
Lovely and sad poem. I enjoyed reading. I can relate...
crying blues
Mizzy4
Appreciate your nice comment Tx,
Kind regards....... Mick.
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Angel04
Mick this is a beautiful love poem, sad but beautifully written, because it is so sad it is so full of love. I love the line
"we danced like butterflies on a sea of green" this I can see, 2 exotic butterflies fluttering about in a beautiful vast green paddock filled with delicate pretty flowers in the warmth of the sun,

Angiehug handshake angel
Mizzy4
Thank you Angela for the lovely compliment,
Glad your own Love is lasting........Mick.
cheering grin
darkhorse555
a very beautifully painted picture mick excellently penned pieceangel cheers
Mizzy4
Thanks Liam...appreciate that
kind comment ! Mick
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madtat29
Fitting title ..fantastic writehandshake
Mizzy4
Hey Madtat, nice comment !
Many thanks.....Mick.
thanks drink pouring
Odette67
Caution flung into the warm Summer breeze,
The broken chains of passion unleashed,

WOW! this is excellent Mick, so much passion and a little sadness too. You have a talent for romantic poetry. hug purple heart
rapturecapture
Hi Mizzy

Really lovely, I enjoyed reading Love's Lament

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxxhug bouquet angel wave
Mizzy4
You're very gracious Martina,
Much a appreciated........Mick.
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