Under the casuarina tree where the sand meets the sea and the gulls drift in the breeze as they live a life of ease where the whitecaps show the way of the wind having it's say and different colours allow the sea to show the depths there may be and the clouds march along the horizon big and strong where the warmth of your touch relaxes me so much i feel the coils unwind as i leave the week behind and drift into that place where time has no grace amidst my thoughts and dreams i am relaxed and so it seems.......
A beautiful worded poem I loved the flow and as I live near ocean could feel the relaxation it gives for real today. So this was a treat to read after my walk.
socrates44San Fernando, Trinidad and TobagoMar 2, 2014
Thank you for taking me on a journey to "that place where time has no grace" into peacefulness and tranquillity!!! Very Soothing write! Have a wonderful day!
Beautiful my love...and I must thank you for indulging me yesterday... maybe not for the ice cream he he he...but I definitely cherish our time...under the casuarina tree watching clouds drift by above us a beautiful afternoon sky.
Hi Steve ......Thanks mate for stopping by and having a gander......much appreciated. Did check out 'Together Through Life '....and hadn't realised you had published before ..........It looks like you have some very interested parties and i wish you and them all the best .......and even though i am very honoured to be asked i will decline at this stage .......So once again thanks and best wishes......Regards Nu
Hi Socrates.........Thanks very much ....glad i could share the essence of my afternoon with you and for you to sense it i am even more appreciative ..........Regards Nu
Hello babe ........without you none of this would be possible .....so thankyou for being a part of my life and making my afternoon even more pleasurable .......Regards Nu
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMar 3, 2014
Impeccable flowing poem Nu. Its beautiful and soothing. Well done.
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Tried to email you to see if you were interested in being part of volume two ... if you are please contact me
Robert
Very Soothing write! Have a wonderful day!
watching clouds drift by above us a beautiful afternoon sky.
Did check out 'Together Through Life '....and hadn't realised you had published before ..........It looks like you have some very interested parties and i wish you and them all the best .......and even though i am very honoured to be asked i will decline at this stage .......So once again thanks and best wishes......Regards Nu
it feels like reading about you
coz you have the same traits
and worth reading again
where the sand meets the sea
and the gulls drift in the breeze
as they live a life of ease
My kind of poem Nu, I love it, so gentle and soothing to the soul.
Rob