Autumn Haiku 575

by orientalkoruGlenella, Queensland, Australia

Mar 2014 589 Views 14 comments

Autumn - Haiku 575

Author: orientalkoru

Catch a gentle breeze
Beautiful sunset warms heart
Orange leaves turn brown

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Posted: Mar 2014

About this poem:

Autumn in Mackay...

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Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKMar 3, 2014

Catch a gentle breeze
Beautiful sunset warms heart
Orange leaves turn brown

A beautiful sunset does warm the heart, so heart warming too is the tiny snowdrops that peep through, no matter how cold. Spring is here in England once again, the years go by so fast. You paint a picture in so few words O.K.

TAR_734unknown, Missouri USAMar 3, 2014

orientalkoru, such a lovely picture you paint of
an Autumn sunset in Mackay...very soothing.
Wonderful Haiku.
Robert

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMar 3, 2014

A well constructed haiku and I do love the picture also.Its awesome. Warm greetings to you : )

orientalkoruOPGlenella, Queensland AustraliaMar 4, 2014

Once again thank you Chrissie for your lovely comment. I can imagine Spring bringing that light feeling for you...down under where we are...autumn has just begun...I have fallen in love with the sunsets in this place...especially during autum and winter...they seem to glow...giving that balmy feeling...thanks once again...

orientalkoruOPGlenella, Queensland AustraliaMar 4, 2014

Thanks Robert...and for your comments...yes beautiful sunsets in Mackay...I took this shot one afternoon when I visited my husband (and yes you are right, Nuwahri61 is my husband)at work... cane fields in the foreground and on the horizon is the mountain and the setting sun...I could not resit but take the shot. I sat there transfixed until it's set totally...it's my kind of therapy

AhyraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaMar 4, 2014

Beautiful haiku orientalkoru, full of autumnal sensations, well done my friend

lindsyjonesunknown, California USAMar 4, 2014

Just full of color and romance my dear. such a delight to read.

Great job.

lj

RedexNorthumberland, England UKMar 5, 2014

Just beautiful I loved it

soulgoddessTokyo, Kanto JapanMar 5, 2014

Thanks for this peaceful Haiku ;)

orientalkoruOPGlenella, Queensland AustraliaMar 9, 2014

Hi M M thank you dear friend for your comment... Always feel honoured to hear from you... Glad to know you like it and the photo... I took that here in Mackay one balmy evening last year...

orientalkoruOPGlenella, Queensland AustraliaMar 9, 2014

Thanks a lot Elena... Lovely to hear from you...

orientalkoruOPGlenella, Queensland AustraliaMar 10, 2014

Hi LJ dear...thank you for your lovely comment...glad to hear you felt that way...thanks once again...

orientalkoruOPGlenella, Queensland AustraliaMar 10, 2014

Hi Redex...thank you so much for dropping in...

orientalkoruOPGlenella, Queensland AustraliaMar 10, 2014

Soulgoddess...I have so much respect for you and your poetry SG and to have you read mine ...Haiku especially...it's very heart warming...thank you...

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