Mr B

by RedHeadedTaurusHere, Michigan, USA

Mar 2014 1,333 Views 35 comments

Mr. B.

It was a gorgeous sunny day ...

On the day you passed away.

Suddenly, the day didn’t seem so nice anymore ...

I was feeling so hurt, down to my very core.

Since then I’ve thought of you, day in and day out ...

I just miss you so deeply, without a doubt.

There was a certain song playing on the day you died ...

The last time I heard that song, I broke down and cried.

I put more pictures of you on my wall to view ...

Sometimes it helps just to be able to look at you.

Other times the pictures make me feel sad ...

But the one with us laughing makes me feel glad.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Mar 2014

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Comments (35)

steve1223adelaide, South Australia AustraliaMar 7, 2014

Pictures can revoke all sorts of emotions ... Nice write

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandMar 7, 2014

beautifully penned deeply crafted piece

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAMar 7, 2014

Beautiful poem!! I can relate to why your feeling . I feel the same way thank you for sharing

morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeMar 7, 2014

I threw mine out a long time ago
nice poem
Ancient poem

Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaMar 8, 2014

Hi Red,

Good to see you back and posting. A poignant poem with an uplifting end.

FergalggNorth, Antrim IrelandMar 8, 2014

an aussie liked her....why one would say, well, an educated guess, cause he wants to bed that lass, and with his education and her lack, tiss a match made in cultural heaven for his benifit and bliss

FergalggNorth, Antrim IrelandMar 8, 2014

thats nice

FergalggNorth, Antrim IrelandMar 8, 2014

you want to be seen, with your poetry and hidden life that now you can type your seen, it hurts thats the pen you write with is your keyboard.....for all these years you disgust me for whence there was a time when you could defend a somebody

FergalggNorth, Antrim IrelandMar 8, 2014

my cats angry

FergalggNorth, Antrim IrelandMar 9, 2014

it hurts...the truth...and from you, it hurts more....you are honerable....today is the 5th hurt ever.....but im glad you was honest....now i think i can move on

FergalggNorth, Antrim IrelandMar 9, 2014

wierd thing is...i actually think you want me....its nnot your fault....its dna stuff

FergalggNorth, Antrim IrelandMar 9, 2014

me thinks one liketh one

online today!

lindsyjonesunknown, California USAMar 9, 2014

RHT, I am all teary on this beautifully crafted write. I am so touched from every line..It looks like you must have had your share of such a passionate love and was taken away...

I can relate so much on your pain,,,although him that I have loved and loved me (albeit so short a while) is gone..the pain is still killing me and yet I am alive...

Thank you for sharing your pain...

lj

benidormwellington, Wellington New ZealandMar 9, 2014

R.H.T

Nice poem hope you find your darling soon.

RedHeadedTaurusOPHere, Michigan USAMar 10, 2014

Thank you steve, darkhorse, and Girlygirl

RedHeadedTaurusOPHere, Michigan USAMar 10, 2014

Thank you morgen, Macduff (great to see you, too), lindsyjones, and benidorm.

RedHeadedTaurusOPHere, Michigan USAMar 10, 2014

Fergalgg -

What are you on about, buddy?

Your comments are senseless and disrespectful

How rude.

RedHeadedTaurusOPHere, Michigan USAMar 10, 2014

Tar,

Thank you.

I've been a member here since 2006 and since then I've seen many of these types.

I have no idea what that guys problem is, and honestly, I don't care.

I do appreciate your kind words.

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandMar 10, 2014

Nice poem but over sad.
Hope the penning of it helped !
Mick.

RedHeadedTaurusOPHere, Michigan USAMar 10, 2014

Thanks, Mizzy.

Yes, writing it did help a bit.

RedHeadedTaurusOPHere, Michigan USAMar 10, 2014

mimzy,

That is a possibility ...

Thank you kindly.

elo69santa cruz, California USAMar 10, 2014

That is very rude of Mr B,usually we have a nice sportive community. I apologize that somebody would behave in this manner here. Hopefully he we will be dealt with swiftly and efficiently. Much respect to you and your work....elo

RedHeadedTaurusOPHere, Michigan USAMar 10, 2014

elo,

I agree - that was very rude. Some people just don't know how to act.

Thank you very much.

online today!

PassionatePoetDunnellon, Florida USAMar 10, 2014

Life can be so unkind.
Memories always in our mind.
Forever to be a part of our past.
Often to linger and last.
But never to define who we were.
And in time becomes a blur.
Never forget or regret.
Life is what is to happen yet.

RedHeadedTaurusOPHere, Michigan USAMar 11, 2014

Thank you, PassionatePoet.

I like the little poem you wrote . . .

online today!

ladyjewelDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaMar 11, 2014

beautiful poem and precious memories

chatonlyman2North Bay, Ontario CanadaMar 11, 2014

I like your values.

RedHeadedTaurusOPHere, Michigan USAMar 12, 2014

I thank you, ladyjewel . . .

RedHeadedTaurusOPHere, Michigan USAMar 12, 2014

I appreciate it, chatonlyman2 . . .

Good to see you here in the poets section!

chatonlyman2North Bay, Ontario CanadaMar 12, 2014

My Friend

paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandMar 13, 2014

A heartfelt and beautiful write,we have to be strong to weather all the storms,it used to hurt me too,there was one guy who was very mean,now I dont see him around.May god comfort you.Sometimes there are things to remind us of the past.