when she breaths her last

she draped her sorrows
on the gentle breeze
she poured her tears
on the falling rain
she sang her passion
on the howling wind
but remained unheard
in her silence
she could have smiled
upon the clouds
and walked her feet
on the lush of green fields
she could have bathed
in the placid lake
while the birds sung
her happiness
she could have swam
in the roaring oceans
while waiting for you
to hold her hands
but she knew all too well
you are gone for good
and so....
for one last moment
she closed her eyes
letting her soul rest
let her spirit drift away
with the passing wind
happy and contented
with the love she held
secured and buried
within her broken heart
as she breath her last.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Mar 2014
About this poem:
love.....
is all there is..

Note: when I wrote this, eons ago, I was overcome with the gentle passing of a beautiful love..I am okay now.

thanks all for your reads and comments as always.

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mimzy333
simply wonderful my friend
Poetnumber1
Wonderful write. You express yourself well in past reflections. Loved it!
rapturecapture
Hi LJ

Beautiful poem...

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxxhug bouquet angel wave
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Thanks my beautiful friend, .

How's the day going?

Your friend
wayne34
Wonderfull write ohug yay
beautifulyou
however filled with sadness, this is still so beautiful,
ty lj sad flower
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M my most loyal friend of mine..Thank you so much and my appreciation always for your visit and comments.

Love you, my friend..

Phyllisbouquet
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Mick, my dear fellow survivor and a gallant fighter,.Thanks so much always..

Phyllisbouquet teddybear
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Martina, thank you so much my dear friend..And by the way Happy St. Patrick's Day.

Phyllis



bouquet teddybear teddybear
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Wayne, how is your world and stay strong as always...Take care my friend...

Phyllisbouquet teddybear teddybear
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Beautiful you, I am most grateful on all your comments on my write and thanks always.

ljbouquet teddybear
Odette67
My word LJ,

This poem is stunningly beautiful in it's poignancy, love it. thumbs up hug purple heart
darkhorse555
beautifully penned excellently crafted piece phyllis dear friendangel wine
Spartacus2012
Both poignant and well crafted LJ!

Kenflower
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My dearest Odette, I am so enlightened always with your comments and I am learning so much from you. I have written so many western HAIKU version because of you. Had it not been with your presentation of the not too rigid rules of our language's lack of fluidity, I am now embracing the system adapted by you and thank you so much..So coming up..

Love you my dear Odette..

phyllis::teddybear: teddybear bouquet bouquet
ladyjewel
bouquet my beautiful friend, this is such a huge step and shows so much strength.
I felt it right inside my soul hug kiss
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liam thank you so much and I hope all is fine with you.

Take care my dear Liam.

phyllisbouquet
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M thank you as always..

phyllisbouquet
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Ken thabks as always
Take care.

Phyllis
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Ken thabks as always
Take care.

Phyllis
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Liam thanks for the comment you made. How are you my friend.
yoursas
beautifully penned nice write !!!!!
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yoursas, thanks for your read and comment.wine
godsprincessonline today!
Sorry - this is the first time I've seen this as I wasn't on this site back in 2014 and poems get buried. Beautiful, poignant poem Phyliss. Glad you were able to recover and go on.

Kathy teddybear hug
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Thanks my dear Kathy. teddybear
Bludylasky
Such a gentle tone to this very lovely write.
take care
elle
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