Letting me down Going all around Wings badly torn Flaming swarms Brass yellow jackets With sharp stingers Made of hot lead Hovers over me Rain from hell Hanging by a thread Dangling my feet Spinning all around Looking down The barrel of A kaleidoscope Of mud and grass Flashing fire and smoke Repelling down Below turning blades Watched by those Whose minds only Dreams for war
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Posted: Mar 2014
About this poem:
Abstract feelings about the sanity or reality of those whose only dreams are for war.
Hi Yankee4you...interesting write Tho' I must admit, "There is nothing "Abstract" about being in a "Fire-Fight" in a "Real War"! Thanks for sharing your thoughts Robert
mimzy333unknown, Washington USAMar 9, 2014
yup the thirst for war is sure like a wasps nest
RedexNorthumberland, England UKMar 10, 2014
Great read yes I got the same picture as mimzy a hornests nest All swarming above arrowed for the kill.
Comments (4)
Tho' I must admit, "There is nothing "Abstract" about being in a "Fire-Fight" in a "Real War"!
Thanks for sharing your thoughts
Robert
All swarming above arrowed for the kill.
Phyllis