" Smitten "

A majestic Eagle soars the lofty sky,
Yet you have swept me higher,
From the ashes where a Love did die,
You kindled a spark to wild fire.
Below lies Atlantic's murky depths,
Titanic's dark watery keeper,
An ocean swelled with tears long wept,
But you have dragged me deeper.
Your touch restored new flesh today,
To the bones of an Interred Love,
And you have swept my soul away,
From it's Hell.. to the Heavens above,
......
Now to cross o'er the Irish Sea.....a dare,
Fear not my Love, I'll soon be there !
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Mar 2014
About this poem:
I actually tried not to write this.........
But I couldn't fight it off !

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Comments (24)

Girlygirl196349
Wow wow it's so beautiful!!!! I'm speechless awesome poem!,,,angel hug cheers
darkhorse555
very very beautifully penned loved how you drew this dear friend excellently penned pieceangel cheers
Mizzy4
Thanks Laura,
Comments like that make the writing
worthwhile.
Glad you decided to stay on here !
Mick.

angel hug thumbs up
Girlygirl196349
Thank you and Chrissie for making me feel welcomed on the poets corner. I just know she's going to love this poem!! Once again it's jutsy beautiful applause cheering cheering
weemick1960
Hi Mick, don't know anything about poetic forms, I'm the real dunce of the group, but I do know what I like as far as poetry Is concerned. This one flies Mick. You have let your heart speak with this one my Friend, you have painted a majestic canvas and I salute you. Really enjoyed this excellent write. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.
Mizzy4
I appreciate your sound comment Liam,
Regards Mick........
buddies good luck
Spartacus2012
Nicely crafted and penned Mick..

Regards,

Kentip hat
Mizzy4
Mike...... many thanks for your
fist class comment !.........Mick.

beer thumbs up
Fellsman
Hi Mick

I love poetry, but the sonnet has long had a special place in my affections and I simply get a buzz reading them.

This is a really fine write... Well played.

Kudos

Bill wine wine
Mizzy4
Thanks for the kind visit Ken.....Mick.
very happy party hat
Mizzy4
Thank you kindly Bill,
I adore Sonnets...above
any other form.
It gives me a lift to know you
enjoyed this one..........Mick.

grin tip hat
Odette67
Below lies Atlantic's murky depths,
Titanic's dark watery keeper,


Dear Mick,

This Sonnet is quite beautiful. hug purple heart
Mizzy4
Christina my Dear,
For you to like this is all !

wink wink blushing heart wings
soulgoddess
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.wine
Mizzy4
You're welcome Sg........... Mick.

wine thumbs up
Poetnumber1
Excellent romantic piece Mick. Your poem sings on the pages.beer
Mizzy4
Thank you PoetNo1,
for your very gracious comment !
Mick.

wave grin
Redex
Mick wow is this true that a little bird told me grin
well now what could be better than two poets as good friends handshake
The poetry comes out all the better too.teddybear
123butterflies
had to comment, only cuz I like the word smitten flirty
ladyjewel
teddybear wine

Now to cross o'er the Irish Sea.....a dare,
Fear not my Love, I'll soon be there !

May the Eagle fly you safethumbs up
Mizzy4
Thank you for the visit 123. Mick.
hug
Mizzy4
Cheers lj, you're such a sweet lady !
Mick.

angel wave
candykid
Excellent.
Mizzy4
Glad you enjoyed Ckid,
Mick.
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