A majestic Eagle soars the lofty sky, Yet you have swept me higher, From the ashes where a Love did die, You kindled a spark to wild fire. Below lies Atlantic's murky depths, Titanic's dark watery keeper, An ocean swelled with tears long wept, But you have dragged me deeper. Your touch restored new flesh today, To the bones of an Interred Love, And you have swept my soul away, From it's Hell.. to the Heavens above, ...... Now to cross o'er the Irish Sea.....a dare, Fear not my Love, I'll soon be there !
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Posted: Mar 2014
About this poem:
I actually tried not to write this......... But I couldn't fight it off !
Hi Mick, don't know anything about poetic forms, I'm the real dunce of the group, but I do know what I like as far as poetry Is concerned. This one flies Mick. You have let your heart speak with this one my Friend, you have painted a majestic canvas and I salute you. Really enjoyed this excellent write. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.
Comments (24)
Comments like that make the writing
worthwhile.
Glad you decided to stay on here !
Mick.
Regards Mick........
Regards,
Ken
fist class comment !.........Mick.
I love poetry, but the sonnet has long had a special place in my affections and I simply get a buzz reading them.
This is a really fine write... Well played.
Kudos
Bill
I adore Sonnets...above
any other form.
It gives me a lift to know you
enjoyed this one..........Mick.
Titanic's dark watery keeper,
Dear Mick,
This Sonnet is quite beautiful.
For you to like this is all !
for your very gracious comment !
Mick.
well now what could be better than two poets as good friends
The poetry comes out all the better too.
Now to cross o'er the Irish Sea.....a dare,
Fear not my Love, I'll soon be there !
May the Eagle fly you safe
Mick.
Mick.