"Mistake" Tanka ( Wayne's 10 word clallenge)

TEMPTRESS GLITTERING,
I run with FRAGRANT flowers,
Until TASTELESS poem,
A MORTAL SIN TAINTED us,
I CROSS over Love's GRAVE,......LOST !
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Posted: Mar 2014
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Comments (11)

Girlygirl196349
Great job!! I like it very much : bouquet: angel
Mizzy4
You're brave to comment on this
Laura......I salute you !
Mick.

hug tip hat gift
lindsyjonesonline today!
Whatever it is my friend...sounds very good to me.

Take care..lj
Mizzy4
Thank you Phyllis,
Good friends are always there !
Mick.

wine buddies sad flower
darkhorse555
top shelf beautiful thoughts dear friend loved itangel cheers
wayne34
Enjoyed your creative poem mizzy well done great workcheers
Mizzy4
Thanks Liam.......appreciated....... Mick.

beer thumbs up
Mizzy4
Thank you Wayne.......great challenge !
Mick.

handshake
Poetnumber1
This a lovely piece here Mick. I had to read the poem twice to fully grasp the connection between the title and the substance of your poem. Enjoyed reading this much. Merci
Mizzy4
Thank you PoetNo1,
The respect you show me
is well noted !
Mick.

bowing drink pouring
Sinclair_RHR
wow thumbs up hug
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