Waynes Challenge 2

by lindsyjonesunknown, California, USA

Mar 2014 794 Views 11 comments

Wayne's Challenge 2

my dreams are Tainted
by the force of my storms
Scattered upon
the Glittering stars
which only
the Fragrant blooms can match
and upon my grave
a heavy Cross worn and weathered
tasteless as the sense
of my Mortal soul
Lost I am
upon the ripples of the ocean
where lay upon the shore
a Temptress, waiting
but can't make me Sin no more

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Posted: Mar 2014

About this poem:

Wayne maybe this is a better try.

Thanks all for your read

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Comments (11)

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandMar 22, 2014

Phyllis......this was worth waiting up for,
Great challenge entry..........Mick.

wayne34liverpool, Merseyside, England UKMar 23, 2014

Wow lindsey great use of my words enjoyed this thnx for your contribution xxx

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandMar 23, 2014

deep very beautifully penned dear friend god bless phyllis

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMar 23, 2014

You've captured hopelessness well here in this descriptive piece Phyllis. I really liked the opening highlighted lines below.

my dreams are Tainted
by the force of my storms
Scattered upon
the Glittering stars
which only
the Fragrant blooms can match

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lindsyjonesOPunknown, California USAMar 23, 2014

My dearest Mick, where your heart holds all that beating for my LADY, I beg she'd hear and heed for in your soul, a the spirit is held only in her kindness and forgiving soul.

I pray my friend.

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lindsyjonesOPunknown, California USAMar 23, 2014

Thanks Wayne. I'm so thrilled to have used them" .

Take care my dear Wayne.

Lj

Sinclair_RHRCyberSpace, Missouri USAMar 23, 2014