a soul flies

dearest friends
i am crying
as i am writing this
truly thinking
this is something
really very beautiful
still do beyond
all words
oh i cannot
forget about love

my quest for you
sweetest honey
truly an
amazing experience
moved this world
forever happy
having found

never giving up
on such a
very beautiful feeling
i will never give up
on you honey
i know deep down
you love me

as i do you sweetheart
without even a question
emotions inside speak
i will wait for you
missing you
like crazy
the sound
of your voice
i am so in love
with you

wish i was there
with you baby
would love to see
beautiful angel smile
i had such great plans
for you and i honey

baby dearest love
i will never stop loving
as you have
taken this soul away
into your space
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Mar 2014
About this poem:
a bit all over the place

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Comments (19)

trurorob
Sorry to hear Liam, hope you can move on, never forget, but look to the future. Your poem depicts how badly you are hurting.
Rob
Odette67
baby dearest love
i will never stop loving


Dear Liam,

This poem is so heart wrenching it brought tears to my eyes.

Take care dear friend. angel hug purple heart
darkhorse555
still i thought this was really special felt so real never felt that deep before yeah rob your so right thank you so kindly dear friend heartfelt appreciatedangel cheers
Spartacus2012
Heartfelt write my friend..I sent you soup mail..

Kentyping
Redex
Love may fly but your soul is yours darkhorse and will ever be so. Your soul holds your love in its hands for the future, just needs peace to nourish it back to health.teddybear
Sinclair_RHR
Liam...blues
my heart "Bleeds" for you broken heart
I care very much for both of you "Wonderful People"...But,
Sometimes "Fate is a Cruel Task-Master" sigh...and life
must go on.

Be Well,
I pray for you both!please
Roberthug

"Chin Up", my dear friend!!!thumbs up comfort
Girlygirl196349
I'm so sorry for the pain your felling hug angel
darkhorse555
ah christina thank you so very much for the heartfelt beautiful comment deeply appreciatedangel
darkhorse555
thank you ken for the wonderful comment heartfeltangel
darkhorse555
ah redex thank you for the heart touching wonderful comment deeply appreciatedangel
darkhorse555
thank you ever so much robert appreciated deeply dear friend angel
darkhorse555
thank you laura for the heartfelt beautiful comment deeply appreciatedangel
SnowCoveredMuse
Wow, Now that made me cry,
So sorry for your pain.
~SASsad flower
darkhorse555
thank you ever so kindly snowcovered wonderful comment heartfelt appreciatedangel wine
Mizzy4
Superb heartfelt writing Liam,
I wish you well !
Mick.

wine comfort
darkhorse555
thank you so much mick truly wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciatedangel grin
orientalkoru
I wish I knew what to say my friend. I only know how pain feels, like you I've been there many times.
Moving on seems impossible, unachievable before we find the strength to take the first strep...
In my case, it was believing that God has a better plan for me that saved me from hanging on with
the pain and the hurting. Believe and it will happen. Take care Liam.... hug wine angel
peachmelba
Ah your poetry is raw from the heart ,it's deeply moving and so beautifully written its a credit to you. Dark horse.wine
darkhorse555
orient dear friends destiny will paint its picture in light smiling truly heartfelt beautiful comment deeply appreciated god bless angel grin
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