"An Autumn Moment in Spring" (Tanka)

A leaf has fallen,
Against it's wishes today,
Removed by ill wind,
From a place it graced on high,
My eyes sad to see it down.
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Posted: Mar 2014
About this poem:
It saddens me when a we lose a poet or poetess
from the corner.

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Comments (17)

darkhorse555
i so understand that sadness mick beautifully penned dear friendangel cheers
lindsyjonesonline today!
My dear Mick, it is always a feeling we can't somehow avoid as the world moves on...and yes, I share with you but we hope that they will come back. As I did, many a times..

Thanks for such a very analogous writing on the falling leaves..

phyllis
Mizzy4
Thank you Liam !
Mick.

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Odette67
A leaf has fallen,
Against it's wishes today,
Removed by ill wind,
From a place it graced on high,
My eyes sad to see it down.


It saddens me when the good poets leave - quite a few left never to return.
Beautiful poem Mick You write from the soul. hug purple heart
Joseph1112
Beautiful poem.
Mizzy4
Thanks Lindsy.
Glad you liked.....Mick

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wine
Mizzy4
Christina,
This will come as a surprise
but you're my hero !
Mick.

kiss yay heart beating
Mizzy4
Cheers ! Joseph,
Appreciated !......Mick.

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candykid
I just saw this in the taskbar and I am so glad I did.....
orientalkoru
You're an awesome guy...you always have something good to say for others! angel
soulgoddess
daydream Thanks to Candykid for bringing this up ;)
Wonderful thoughts in a Tanka!

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Mizzy4
Thanks Christian....
Regards Mick.
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Mizzy4
Thanks Christian....
Regards Mick.
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Spartacus2012
Almost missed this good write Mick!

Kentip hat
Mizzy4
Thank you Cathy,
I'm really ordinary......
Regards Mick.

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Mizzy4
Much appreciated Angeline,
Thank you.......Mick.

angel
Mizzy4
Thanks Ken,
With the best will,
I probably miss some of yours.
Mick.

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