Non Stop Raindrops

by candykidAshburn, Virginia, USA

Mar 2014 1,561 Views 25 comments

Non-Stop Raindrops

Seasons of anguish in rhythmic rotation...
Meticulously taking their time...
Summers of sadness...
Winters of madness...
Thoroughly mine...

Like the inner-workings of a complex clock...
Gears of misery, memory blocked...
Autumn emotions...
Springtime erosions...
Raindrops of pain refusing to stop....

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Posted: Mar 2014

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Comments (25)

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandMar 29, 2014

loved the way you drew this beautifully penned dear friend

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAMar 29, 2014

Good stuff C.K.,

regards,

Ken

RedexNorthumberland, England UKMar 29, 2014

this is true poetry in motion. Rain can be gentle on others cheeks.

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAMar 29, 2014

Am happy to read the feedback from you all. Thank you.

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAMar 29, 2014

I really enjoy this to me rain drops are tears from our loved ones in heaven missing us

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAMar 30, 2014

Thanks girlygirl. That's a great analogy. ..

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAFeb 11, 2015

Thanks Liam. ....bringing this back for someone.

Abby1963California, USAFeb 11, 2015

Wow strong poem !! brought tears to my eyes ! .such a lovely write !

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoFeb 12, 2015

While perusing this I was thinking that the different seasons brings with it different emotions but sadness is what has been showcased here. Maybe my interpretation is wrong. Thanks for reviving this one as I missed this one the first time around Christian.

aviasSoutheast, Missouri USAFeb 12, 2015

Christian...Its truly wonderful how you placed the seasons with the emotions...really liked the concept...hoping spring brings raindrops of happiness this year......Harriett:

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandFeb 12, 2015

Hi CK

I can only wish, I had written this!
Sublime thoughts in.. Non-Stop Raindrops

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxx

BajanshayBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosFeb 12, 2015

Ck!
Just beautiful!

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJan 1, 2016

PN1......thank you. I hope this New year is your best ever.....

godsprincessOwego, New York USAJan 1, 2016

Christian: Praying that you only have sunbeams of sunshine for the 4 seasons ahead in 2016. No raindrops for you! Only happy days!

Kathy

doglover14hudson, New York USAJan 4, 2016

Beautiful!
May raindrops from the heavens wash away all your sorrow, and allow you to breath freely of the clean air.
Mady

madtat29Farmington, New Mexico USAJan 6, 2016

Dig it....

ReaderOfSoulsunknown, Texas USAJan 7, 2016

Wonderfully painted!! May your new year be sunshine and the raindrops be kinder.

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJun 4, 2016

Harriet. ....I truly thank you for that lovely comment.

online today!

southmiami4321Tampa, Florida USAJun 4, 2016

Year round seasons differ our emotions.
Beautifully presented.
Hope when light hits your raindrops it reflects gorgeous rainbows of colors to make you smile! SM

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAAug 25, 2017

Martina........

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USAAug 25, 2017

Hi, candykid,
Seasons of anguish in rhythmic rotation...
Meticulously taking their time...
What a powerful opening with your imagery describing anguish as rhythmic and Meticulous... Thank you for sharing.