I never comment on his poems Laura - But to be honest I didn't see what you see - maybe it's me. Though I do know where you are comming from dear - drink ruins live's - I know - been there.

Again I don't want to preach I feel like we're not educated on the affects of liquor SURPY SPIRTS SO SOURLY SWEET RELIEF WITH NO SUBISTUTITUDE KNOWN???

"And still they gazed, and still their wonder grew,
that one small head could carry all it knew."

So that's how experts write poetry.
Letters, positions, word counts,
finalizing....

Like people who are good at physics play piano well, not by feeling
it in their fingertips and feet, but as a mathematical equation in their heads, translated to their hands by reading a page of music.

God help them!

But yet, see the response you evoked?
So, are you or are you not??

No wonder you want to keep redirecting me to the "Poetry for dummies" page.

Hope you find relive in the same encarigment of friends
as you share around much kindnes

Brought this back for Rob.....the kidney stone lodged in an unwelcomed area
has prevented necessary sleep, which in turn has been a stark reminder of how demons use their expertise to relieve pain with poison.....

Danesh,......This arena is not for competition. You are an extremely gifted writer that defies all logic, especially considering where you have, and currently reside....Given these facts, you too are a master of words. Some of my favorite pieces on the corner were written by your very hands..... “Devil’s Dice,” is a true masterpiece,.........crafted from infants bones??!!!! Now that is absolutely next level....I don’t think I would have ever thought of such a brilliant line that was certainly appropriate for that poem....Thank you for your positive feedback, but you are outstanding yourself. Never forget that bro.