" Awesome Kiss "
A million loving thoughts to speak,
Invade my distracted brain,
The content of which I'm bursting to leak,
to The Corner, their patience to drain.
Sometimes I feel they've heard enough,
Of a Love that's still so young,
Though not to express, is ever so tough,
So how can I control my tongue ?
Then it dawned !! the ideal plan,
A sure way to stop me from talking,
And spare all poets from a smitten Irish man,
With his love lines, the corner he's stalking.
Kiss me Odette !!... from your kissing list,
With intensity from one to seven,
Smack me now ! with at least the sixth,
And send my mute tongue to Heaven.
Oh Wow ! my dear you taste so nice,
you've spared the corner from plight,
I can't even ask for a second slice,
But when we break for air, I might !
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 2014
About this poem:
I posted some dark ones recently.
This one is a lighthearted view
of " The Corner ".
Thank you for the inspiration dear ! He He.
Comments (18)
This is a beautiful poetry from a gentleman to his lady. Excellent craftsmanship!
Thank you !
Mick.
Ken
I'm sure Lady Odette will just love this beautiful poem. it is so full of passion.
Kiss me Odette !!... from your kissing list,
With intensity
For your fine comment !
Mick.
Mick.
For such a kind comment.
Mick.
Enjoy !
Mick.
Mick.
I'm thrilled you like this !
"With intensity"........
My toes are curling already !
Kind regards......Mick.
Excellent!!
A wonderful read,thank you for sharing
Martina xxx
Then it was worth writing.
Thank you..........Mick.
For your ever gracious comment.
Mick..