I am gone

When I lost you,
I lost most of me,
Now I can't find who I used to be,
Though I'm searching desperately,
There was a guy with spark in his eye,
Joking, smiling, laughing at life,
There was a girl he loved so much,
He gave her his heart,
His soul,
His trust,
Because he thought,
He knew who she was,
It fell apart one awful day,
A good honest man went away,
Full of sorrow anger and pain,
He felt he could no longer stay,
Alone inside,
I feel so bare,
Because part of me is no longer there...
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 2014
About this poem:
Kinda miss that other me...He'll be back someday hopefully....

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Joseph1112
You, brother are not alone, been there, feel your pain in every word. Awesome write man and I love the title "I am gone". It just fits u know!
darkhorse555
i totally relate to this deep very beautifully crafted excellent piece dear friend sometimes hard to find god blessangel
fjamesj9701
Hes there my friend, but I get what your saying all to real. Really good stuff Mr MTTbeer
candykid
Cool write Madtat.....
madtat29
Ty Girly..it is sad but true...conversing
Nuwahri61
Hey Mad can really feel this one bro ...........Regards Nucool
madtat29
Thanks Joseph...Titles always give me troubleconfused drinking
madtat29
DH...Wish we all hadn't been there ,but then we wouldn't be here...cheers
madtat29
Thanks for the visit Jesse...preciate ya buddrinking
madtat29
Right on Candykid...Thanks for the commentbeer
madtat29
Hiya Phyllis...seems everything in life is cyclic...just keeps repeating...I just try to write about it and move on...you know...go with the flow...Mad love teddybear keep the faith
madtat29
Thanks Nu...Best to you and yours conversing beer
mcradloff
There are some women who can make good honest men go away. I think of the movie I watch every year at this time, The Ten Commandments. Moses was able to keep his goodness by staying away from the queen.angel
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