Torch of Love

For far too long I have carried this torch
Walking over hot coals, my feet sorely scorched
It flickered with the light of a star lit candle
Much more than one single heart could handle

It absorbed my life but brought little satisfaction
It always searched to find your loves reaction
It sought the beam of passionate emission
Always seeming turned off, in darkened submission

But still it glowed like a homing beacon
Just for your affection to guide your minds reason
All you had to do was press the hearts switch
But your fingers held back, resisting their twitch

If two lights could never hope to meet
Then singular love is a sorrowful lonely street
Like the memories of time it will eventually fade
Like the passing of the last old soldiers parade

For the torch of love cannot forever stay bright?
When the batteries of life fail in their sight
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Posted: Dec 2009
About this poem:
enreturned love, like a dying candle

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Comments (45)

jazzy75
Rob - Like the questions of love raised in this poem...thanks for the thoughts!! Happy to see you're back and posting :-) hug
trurorob
Thanks my friend Jazzy
rob
jerseygirl49
Hey Rob,
This poem is my lifes story, how did you know?rolling on the floor laughing No but really, very sad..but it is easy for me to relate. Thanx for posting..and welcome back!!applause sad flower teddybear JGFwave
boyshchrm6
See I missed this gem.Beauty Rob.
Beautiful poem encapturing
sorrow of one way love.thumbs up applause sad flower

Hey JG Cry me a river violin blah blah rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing
trurorob
I suppose we can all relate in some way Nancy!
Thanks for the comment.
Rob
moonlove
hmm, complecated but nice to read your poem againgrin grin
trurorob
Thanks Larry,
JG has a good friend in you, so let it flow!
rob
LynnC1955
Nicely written, I can relate!
trurorob
Thanks Moonlove,
Just a way of looking at lonely love!
rob
Skybow
Tender write, did you loose a love or haven't met her yet? Either way I enjoyed reading your musing. Thank you for writing this. kiss
trurorob
Thank you Lynnc,
I suppose we can all relate to this, at least us that are on this site.
rob
trurorob
Thanks Skybow,
Lost I am afraid to say, thanks for your kind words.
rob
Kinderling
Great insight, wonderful coice of words, and the pain and recognition works it's way into a solution at the end.
paloma66
I feel connected to this.....Rob it brings out the real you.Pain and being in love makes us poets.I cant find words enough to write here at the moment,it has touched my heart.Keep going Rob give us some more of the poet in you.Palomateddybear
trurorob
Thank you Kinderling.
Keep writing
rob
QuietStormF
Very nice work Rob.. but where there is hope, there is always a glimmer? well for some of us anyway.. Good work !hug teddybear bouquet
trurorob
Thank you Paloma my friend, kind words,
rob
purpledragonfly
The sadness of feeling unrequited love. Lovely poem.banana
trurorob
Thanks QSF always kind words.
rob
Earlgreytea
'the beam of passionate emission' ha, ha, what a way with words, classy write, nuff said...
trurorob
Thank you Anna,
Rob
agoodguy2have
"All you had to do was press the hearts switch
But your fingers held back, resisting their twitch

If two lights could never hope to meet
Then singular love is a sorrowful lonely street"

now that is what I call poetry!...ok now I'm up to date, thanks Rob.
trurorob
Thanks Earl!!
rob
Redex
Rob lovely poem touched a cord I think as you said most on here have felt that. Nice way to put it thoughteddybear
sophiasummer
If two lights could never hope to meet
Then singular love is a sorrowful lonely street


Beautifully sad Rob.
A familiar road for me...
your write, is so real...

angelsad flower
jeddah12
this is a wonderful piece of poem and its very well penned from a real poet,,wow,,,i like it.thanks for sharingwine teddybear
niah9
A heartfelt write Rob..but the final words...just make it more meaningful...Niah/K wow teddybear
periwinkleanlace
One of your most beautiful poemsbouquet
trurorob
Thanks Wendy
rob
trurorob
Thanks Dave
rob
trurorob
Thanks Redex
rob
trurorob
Thank you Soph, hope you are well
rob
Odette67
If two lights could never hope to meet
Then singular love is a sorrowful lonely street
Like the memories of time it will eventually fade
Like the passing of the last old soldiers parade

Exquisite poem Rob...Suits my mood of the moment. thumbs up hug purple heart
trurorob
Thanks Odette, yes we noticed your mood, rather melancholic, sometimes thats good, but as we know it will pass.
Rob
orientalkoru
Unrequited love-always sad...but even that will soon vanish in your mind..sad flower
"Like the memories of time it will eventually fade
Like the passing of the last old soldiers parade" teddybear
sophiasummer
One would know of Light Towerswave
Great to see you.

SS
cool
cheers
trurorob
Thank you oriental lady, glad you enjoyed
Rob
trurorob
Thank you Soph, nice to see you, hope life is still good.
Rob
trurorob
Thank you Celticpoet, very kind words, but it is not me, I write from my imagination, but appreciate your thoughts.
Rob
trurorob
May it stay with you MM, thanks, this is an old piece, going round again.
Rob
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