MOVING ON

yes time has come
packing my sorrows
are but needed to move on
and I am,
it is not like
it wont be here to stay
but that life has changed
in many ways
and lies and betrayal
are not buried away
but I have become keen
and strong, and
no longer blind
like I have become
because I knew
right from the start
you needed to pull me in
as I needed you out
and so we both did
shared the homily of love
albeit the good became bad
and I am now, facing
my golden moments
of simply moving on.

and so I am
and I don't even need
your permission
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 2014
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darkhorse555
totally relate beautifully penned phyllis good luck dear friend all the best in wishes god bless on you journeyangel wine
Girlygirl196349
Wow!!! Nicely written !!teddybear teddybear angel cheering angel
benidorm
Lindsy.

Lovely poem I wish you all the best in your new journey.teddybear
rapturecapture
Hi Lindsy

Powerful..a very strong beautiful feel good factor, after reading

Thank you for sharingbouquet

Martina xxx hug teddybear angel heart wings wave
Joseph1112
Enjoyable read and powerful too! Thx 4 sharing! J
lindsyjones
Thanks Liam my appreciation as always
lindsyjones
Girly thank you so much my dear beautiful fellow Californian

Take care
bungallow55
Moving on,

that's exactly what I did...and the change is good

in many wayshug take good care, my friendwine
Happygolucky4u
Moving an action word. Something one does not says. Your poem was one of a thought that has been on my mind a lot here lately. Moving on can be so bitter sweet. To see the past go yet to look forward to the future. May all good things come to those who move on wine teddybear
Mizzy4
Nice write Phyllis,
I like the positive ending !
Mick.

hug
lindsyjones
Benni thanks as always..
lindsyjones
Martina, my dearest gorgeous friend..

thanks as always..
lindsyjones
Joseph thank you so much and my appreciation..
lindsyjones
Manny thanks for your visit and comment
lindsyjones
Happy go lucky what a great pleasure to see you on my write. It is so refreshing to see our friends who had been with us long before I joined. And that is more than three years now...

Thanks so much...
ladyjewel
and so I am
and I don't even need
your permission

this is the most powerful part, makes me want to smile and hug you hug
trurorob
Not always easy, but spoken well here.
Rob
roseoscura
Happy for you dear that you have laid the past to rest,remain happy and blessed.hug Beautifully written.bouquet
lindsyjones
Thanks Rose, you're always a breath of good spirits.
Take care. bouquet
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