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by candykidAshburn, Virginia, USA

May 2014 2,018 Views 48 comments

Woman

Author: candykid
As beautiful as God's Eternal Wife...
I cannot look upon you...
Your beauty overwhelms my senses...
Suppression of breath...
Skin standing on end...
Eyes raining never-ending...
I tremble at the very thought of you...

My unworthiness is my curse...
Giving countless reasons to change...
And yet my inability to behold your perfection...
Gives me reasons not to....

A winding waterway dripping with cuteness...
How could there ever be such beauty?
Like liquid glass that's cool to the touch...
Your incomparable pureness reflected into mirrrors...
Incapable of dishonesty...
Blind with perfect vision...

I water you...
You water me...
And yet, my thirst is unquenchable....
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2014

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Comments (48)

darkhorse555
darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandMay 3, 2014
christian outstanding beautiful images drawn loved it dear friendangel
Girlygirl196349
Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAMay 3, 2014
Hey kid I hope all is good. Beautiful poem it brought tears to my eyes also hug cheering angel wave
Spartacus2012
Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAMay 3, 2014
Awesome romantic tribute write Christian!

Kenthumbs up
Odette67
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKMay 3, 2014
As ever C K beautiful poem. purple heart
Mizzy4
Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandMay 3, 2014
Extremely romantic Christian,
Lovely choice of words !
Mick.

beer
benidorm
benidormwellington, Wellington New ZealandMay 3, 2014
Lovely poem
Poetnumber1
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMay 3, 2014
Romantically crafted Christian. I envision everything succinctly as you painted it so passionately. handshake
itchywitch
itchywitchgalway, Galway IrelandMay 3, 2014
what a beautiful write Candywave
Joseph1112
Joseph1112Brampton, Ontario CanadaMay 4, 2014
Exquisite write brother! "As beautiful as Gods eternal wife..." Great line. J applause cheers
lindsyjonesonline today!
lindsyjonesunknown, California USAMay 4, 2014
Eyes raining never-ending...
I tremble at the very thought of you...


What a testament of such a very profound and endearing love CK.

Take care, I hope one day if not now, you will be reciprocated..
candykid
candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAMay 6, 2014
Thank you everyone for your kind and specific comments. They are always very much appreciated.
Bajanshay
BajanshayBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosMay 6, 2014
C.K

I just love this poem. Baeutiful!!!hug
JEANIEMAC
JEANIEMACLETTERKENNY, Donegal IrelandJul 3, 2014
"My unworthiness is my curse.."

Of course you are worthy,she waters you.
candykid
candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJul 3, 2014
Hi Jeanie dear friend. ...do you care to elaborate?
JEANIEMAC
JEANIEMACLETTERKENNY, Donegal IrelandJul 4, 2014
If you water her and she waters you, then you're off to a good start.
trurorob
trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainJul 4, 2014
Nice one, loved the ending.
Rob
Redex
RedexNorthumberland, England UKJul 4, 2014
Lovely poem sounds like that love cannot be reachedhug
Earlgreytea
EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusJul 4, 2014
[A winding waterway dripping with cuteness...]
what delicious and original phrases, lovely, thanks my friend! handshake
cafetwo2010
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAJul 5, 2014
This is a fine piece of work Candy. You have a remarkable
eloquence in your poetry.
Cafe
wallops1964
wallops1964Wakefield, West Yorkshire, England UKJul 5, 2014
Truly beautiful. Like seeing into someone's very soul and their deep yearning for a love. heart wings
SnowCoveredMuse
SnowCoveredMusefarmington, Maine USAJul 5, 2014
Ck,


Wow, amazing
job, My favorite
of yours thus far!

~SAS~hug
MCBGDIK
MCBGDIKnorth miami, Florida USAJul 6, 2014
CANDYKID,THIS WRITING WAS EXTREMELY DEEP AND MEANINGFUL! REALLY A PLEASURE TO READ!banana
candykid
candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJul 10, 2014
Thank you for clarifying Jeanie. purple heart
candykid
candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJul 10, 2014
Thank you Bajanshay. ..we miss you .....purple heart
candykid
candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJul 10, 2014
Rob, I am particularly interested in your specific feedback. Thanks friend.
candykid
candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJul 10, 2014
Thanks redex. ...it can't be at the moment but thank you.purple heart
candykid
candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJul 10, 2014
Thank your Mr.EGT.......your specific comments are very welcomed. .
candykid
candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJul 10, 2014
Cafe.....no words necessary brother....thank you very much.
candykid
candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJul 10, 2014
Wallops, so lovely to see your rare visit.....thank you for your feedback.purple heart
candykid
candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJul 10, 2014
Snow.......im happy you enjoyed this one......thank you very much poet friend.purple heart
candykid
candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJul 10, 2014
Hey MC.........nice to know it struck a chord with you. Thanks.
candykid
candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USASep 21, 2014
Thank you Reuben. .....miss you brother...
rapturecapture
rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandSep 21, 2014
Hi C.K.


Simply beautiful!...So peaceful and pure!


A winding waterway dripping with cuteness...
How could there ever be such beauty?

Its a beautiful Day here in Kerry ... the church bells from the town are sounding more joyful as I write my response to your wonderful poem...Woman



Thank you for sharing.

Martina xxxteddybear hug bouquet
diana_1
diana_1San fernando, San Fernando Trinidad and TobagoSep 21, 2014
This is incomparable, I love it...
diana_1
diana_1San fernando, San Fernando Trinidad and TobagoSep 21, 2014
This is incomparable, I love it...
candykid
candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAOct 12, 2014
I can hear those church bells ringing all the way over here on this Sunday morning Martina.....it's such a lovely sound...Thank you dear.love teddybear
cafetwo2010
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAOct 12, 2014
A second reading of your poem Candy seems sweeter than the first.
Great poems are like that. God bless
Cafe
Bajanshay
BajanshayBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosOct 12, 2014
Christian,
Still beautiful the second time again!wine really love this!
Poetnumber1
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoOct 12, 2014
I've missed seeing your quality poems on the board Christian. Its nice to see it lighting this corner once more. All the best to you.

cheers
candykid
candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAFeb 27, 2015
Thank you Shelly dear.....purple heart
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