Woman

As beautiful as God's Eternal Wife...
I cannot look upon you...
Your beauty overwhelms my senses...
Suppression of breath...
Skin standing on end...
Eyes raining never-ending...
I tremble at the very thought of you...

My unworthiness is my curse...
Giving countless reasons to change...
And yet my inability to behold your perfection...
Gives me reasons not to....

A winding waterway dripping with cuteness...
How could there ever be such beauty?
Like liquid glass that's cool to the touch...
Your incomparable pureness reflected into mirrrors...
Incapable of dishonesty...
Blind with perfect vision...

I water you...
You water me...
And yet, my thirst is unquenchable....
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Posted: May 2014

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candykid
Thank you Liam.....cheers
avias
Christian...The last lines..."I water you...you water me..And yet, my thirst is unquenchable." That is quality thinking my friend...beautiful!thumbs up wine
candykid
Laura. ....I thank you ever so much for your kind and specific feedback.purple heart
candykid
Thank you sweetness....purple heart
southmiami4321online today!
Written with such passion, very expressive, like the endless fountain of beauty in words.
Enjoyed your poem and waiting for more to come...wave
doglover14
I am very new to this sight, and have only posted 8 poems; but I had to write and let you know how deeply this writing touched me.

Thank you so much for sharing both your feelings and your amazing talent.

Mady smitten
candykid
Someone asked for a response, thank you all for your comments. purple heart
godsprincessonline today!
I missed this the first time around Christian. This is a beautiful poem. Thanks for bringing it back.

Kathy teddybear
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