to see you love

a battlefield
of faces
inside the mind
there is
a lot of
empty vessels
to see
a desert
in dry and
barren waste oasis
floating around
this world

breaking illusions
ripples spiraling out
of shattered dreams
crashing storms
upon the rocks
naked bare
smashed and bound
in agony

empty promises made
love your not
an illusion
every dream
every though
has always
been you
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2014

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Spartacus2012
Sensitive write Liam..Well penned..

Kenhandshake
SnowCoveredMuse
I agree with Ken,
very well penned.
great job as usual!

~SASconversing
Girlygirl196349
Beautiful as usual Liam teddybear hug cheering angel
shadow1950
hey mate this is filled with sensitivity excellent pen Liam hugs
Poetnumber1
I could tell that it springs from a true it experience because it is expressed in an emotive and heartfelt way. I enjoyed reading this one Liam. Regards old pal.
darkhorse555
ken dear friend thank you for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciatedangel cheers
Joseph1112
"Empty promises made love your not an illusion every dream every thought has always been u" amazing bro! J handshake applause
Ondos
Very good poetry!
darkhorse555
snowcovcered thank you so kindly dear friend for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciatedangel grin
darkhorse555
wonderful comment laura thank you so much dear friend deeply appreciatedangel grin
darkhorse555
linda thank you kindly dear friend beautiful comment deeply appreciatedangel grin
darkhorse555
to everyone who commented on this sorry i am late answering at the time the head was all over the place thank you all so kindly dear friend truly heartfelt appreciatedangel grin wine cheers
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