When just a lad, oh my was' I real' bad Just wanted attention from the ones Whom I thought they loved me Perhaps just a boy with skyed dreams.
Floyd's in the background playin it right One of their albums spinin all night.
Animals I recall, or was it the Wall Ya it was the Wall, when my feet first dug in Trying to find, the likes of who's me And not yellow Sin, where those minutes belonged.
Them thoughts that took flight a billion skin sheds ago Rode back to me later that time is right now Stuck in a dovetail of free riding wind To see if your life has been ventured by gain
Or simple'd regrets pleasured by pain!~
~Bentlee~
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Posted: May 2014
About this poem:
I got to thinking tonight about how so many people keep making the same pained mistakes in their life, if only they could come out of the box, if only for a minute to see.............
Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAMay 11, 2014
Love the poem I feel like jack in the box I'm popping out of my box so much lately
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKMay 11, 2014
Girly - came here to comment on one last poem b/f I go... but had to first comment to you, cuz you made me laugh! Jack in the box (I was told that by somebody before b/c of my disappearing/reappearing profile )
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKMay 11, 2014
Bentlee - Great poem - from beginning to end... I think I most love the 1st 2 and the last 2
'When just a lad, oh my was' I real' bad Just wanted attention... To see if your life has been ventured by gain
Or simple'd regrets pleasured by pain!~'
Wonderful writing, along with the thoughts behind it
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'When just a lad, oh my was' I real' bad
Just wanted attention...
To see if your life has been ventured by gain
Or simple'd regrets pleasured by pain!~'
Wonderful writing, along with the thoughts behind it
~SAS