Stuck in Traffic

Fast was spoken
Those harsh words
Whistles blowing
Fingers pointing
Commanding my attention
Directing me places
I didn’t want to go
My life… a big detour
Stuck in a hot swell
Of stinking exhaust
Plumes falling apart
Black clouds parting
Ushering me in
And swallowing
Me whole
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Posted: May 2014
About this poem:
We all know this experience too well.

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beautifulyou
hi there yankee wave

if our lives are a big detour,
maybe we're not being detoured after all,

it's just our lives, until it changes very happy

nice allegory. it's good to see you again motorcycle
itchywitch
Howdy do yankeewave
there are some advantages in having a broom wink
fjamesj9701
Great write Yank I can surely dig it…Jessehandshake
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