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by candykidAshburn, Virginia, USA

May 2014 1,717 Views 29 comments

Starfall

Author: candykid
I was all alone again last night with nothing much to do...
Staring at old pictures with bright thoughts of me and you...
Inspired by lit stars at night, I looked up in the sky...
And what I saw, was two stars fall, two stars that were so true...

Trailing memories with cosmic dust just streaking through my heart...
Sparking off sensations that require all our part...
Trying to trick the hands of time, I tried to push rewind...
Only to find, these hands of time, only work when you push start....
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2014
About this poem:
To distant memories and new beginnings.

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Spartacus2012
Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAMay 16, 2014
Salud Christian!

Kencheers
Girlygirl196349
Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAMay 16, 2014
Lovely poem I really enjoyed it hug cheering angel wave
darkhorse555
darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandMay 16, 2014
loved the vision drawn in this christian dear friendangel grin
reguiny2006
reguiny2006Réguiny, Bretagne FranceMay 16, 2014
candykydd, Though that the last line was quite compelling, an enjoyable read, Phil.
fjamesj9701
fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 16, 2014
An exceptional piece my friend, well done…Jessehandshake
Odette67
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKMay 19, 2014
I was all alone again last night, with nothing much to do...
Staring at old pictures with bright thoughts of me and you...
Inspired from lit stars at night, I looked up in the sky...
And what I saw, was two stars fall, two stars that were so true...

Truly beautiful CK. thumbs up purple heart
orientalkoru
orientalkoruGlenella, Queensland AustraliaMay 20, 2014
a compelling write, enjoyed reading it CK...we see the stars very clearly at night where we are at the moment...just under the Milky Way...and they shine really bright...the thought of a rewind button is a clever idea...can be either good or bad and I think should always come with an erase button angel ... wine
Redex
RedexNorthumberland, England UKMay 21, 2014
This poem truly hits the spot (distant memories---new beginings)
You depicted that brilliantly teddybear
lindsyjonesonline today!
lindsyjonesunknown, California USAMay 21, 2014
My kind of thinking CK. The power of believing there is always a new start is a very positive thinking.

And no one can stop us. A move only us can do and it is good.

Thanks for the share.
candykid
candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAMay 24, 2014
Thanks everyone. .....you're the best.......thumbs up
Mizzy4
Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandMay 24, 2014
Simply a gorgeous write Christian,
Loved the analogy,
Mick.

peace
candykid
candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAMay 24, 2014
Mick..........thumbs up cheers
Earlgreytea
EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusMay 26, 2014
[Trailing memories with cosmic dust just streaking through my heart...]

Beautiful poetry, my friend, beautiful and deep and thrilling..., thanks for sharing...
wine
SnowCoveredMuse
SnowCoveredMusefarmington, Maine USAMay 26, 2014
"Trailing memories with cosmic dust just streaking through my heart"

I am in awe of your pen,
as always!

~SAS~heart wings
candykid
candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USANov 13, 2014
Thank you Mr.EGT.cheers
avias
aviasSoutheast, Missouri USANov 17, 2014
A night of stars and thoughts..inspired...how to "rewind hands of time".
If we could, would we repeat all we did? Who knows, it is best to push the button for start again.comfort conversing
cafetwo2010
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USANov 18, 2014
Awesome poem. Man should not be the servant of time but time the servant of man.
'And in the mysterious equations of love..'( A beautiful mind..the movie),' 'Love makes
all things new again.'( bible).
Cafe
candykid
candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJan 11, 2015
Thank you Snow....just where have you gone to?purple heart
candykid
candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJan 11, 2015
Avias......thank you for reading and your kind and specific feedback. ...purple heart
candykid
candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJan 11, 2015
JCafe. .....a many thanks....cheers
candykid
candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USASep 18, 2015
Mick....thanks brother. ....I really hope all is well. ...cheers
candykid
candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAMar 19, 2016
Thanks Phyllis...purple heart
southmiami4321online today!
southmiami4321Tampa, Florida USAMar 19, 2016
Beautiful write, enjoyed it. Memories always sparks our life...wave
godsprincessonline today!
godsprincessOwego, New York USAMar 19, 2016
Very poignant Christian and beautiful. Thank you.

Kathy teddybear sad flower
candykid
candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAFeb 28, 2017
Thank you for that fine comment Kathy...purple heart
candykid
candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USANov 25, 2017
SM.....Thank you very much....purple heart
candykid
candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USANov 3, 2018
GP......Grazi....oh how I wish the falling of stars would become a more frequent occurrence......as you do too......purple heart
goldengloss
goldenglossMalahide North County Dublin, Dublin IrelandNov 11, 2018
Starfall ~ such a sad poem, but one we all have been through, well most of us. Having what we thought was a Soulmate to get through this life with. Feeling part of one, being one, and then it all falls apart, lies and the sadness of letting go, grieving and moving on.
Well written.
candykid
candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAOct 28, 2019
Bless all you lit stars.....
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