by Mizzy4Navan, Meath, Ireland
May 2014 1,142 Views 29 comments
I'm Aways Here Dear ! ( For Christina )
Should life e'er cause you stumble to a fall,
and you lie broken, tearful on the clay,
I then would pause my days to aid your call,
No lady owns my love, but you this day.
I'd gladly piece together one by one,
The shattered segments of your crystal heart,
Embrace you in my arms 'till hurt is gone,
Fond dreams of you, now tearing me apart.
Rise my beauteous princess, take my hand,
And you will feel my love is strong and true,
Important that you know and understand,
The heart within this chest, thumps but for you.
Should e'er you dab a teardrop o'er the miles,
I pray this ardent verse restores your smiles.
and you lie broken, tearful on the clay,
I then would pause my days to aid your call,
No lady owns my love, but you this day.
I'd gladly piece together one by one,
The shattered segments of your crystal heart,
Embrace you in my arms 'till hurt is gone,
Fond dreams of you, now tearing me apart.
Rise my beauteous princess, take my hand,
And you will feel my love is strong and true,
Important that you know and understand,
The heart within this chest, thumps but for you.
Should e'er you dab a teardrop o'er the miles,
I pray this ardent verse restores your smiles.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2014
About this poem:
A Sonnet in support of a Special Friend !You are a much loved poetess here Christina,
You are always honest and truthful.....it'll take a lot
more than jealous idle comment to break your spirit !
Mick xxx
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Comments (29)
Phyllis
This is such a beautiful Sonnet - You my dear are up there with the best of the best - God broke the mold when he made you - What a beautiful world this would be - if there were more men like you.
Thank you dearest for being my bestest friend.
I've had a bit of a break and have missed so much of your poetry, so it's lovely to see your wonderful sonnet addressed to one of my favourite ladies on here. One who certainly deserves all the accolades.
I'm glad you enjoyed this,
and I appreciate your kind support.
This is a fleeting visit, hopefully I'll be back
before too long.
Mick.
comments and wishes,
Much appreciated.........Mick.
The poet writes, I pray this ardent verse restores your smiles. Surely, when written with such caring, it could not help but do so. Thanks for sharing.
Although you are taking a break from the corner, your poetic skills continue to flourish, as evidenced by this excellent sonnet for a lady of class, Lady Odette.
I do not know how many persons at CS note poem construction in terms of rhyme, rhythm and metre. You continue to excel in these areas, which require greater effort, and also in the sentiments expressed in the content.
Stay strong! Poetry Corner needs you!
Thanks for your lovely sentiments,
Every good wish with your new love !
Mick.
Always appreciated........Mick.
When I sort myself out.....hopefully
I'll be back full time.
Thank you..............Mick.
best loved poets and people on here,
I could never leave the corner for good,
Unfortunately I feel the poetry itself
is suffering at the hands of a few,
I don't intend to let it happen.
Take care buddy,
Thanks for your nice wishes !
Mick.
The sheer quality of your own verse,
sees you occupy a special place
on this corner !
Mick.
Coming from an eminent poet as you,
and it's gratefully received.......
I think Lady Odette has a way
of finding new poetic material
inside this head of mine !
Thank you....Kind regards......Mick.
Angeline,
Thanks so much.....Mick.
Ken
It's nice to be here......
Mick.
Life is busy.....but good !
Mick.
If the world was full of guys like you
there'll be no tears in women's eyes!
Your lovely comment is
much appreciated !
Mick..
Superb thoughts...a joy to read!
Thank you for sharing
Martina xxx
Your comments are always
welcome !
Mick.
Reading this again ... this is a wonderful reminder that virtue really does exist in humanity and in public places like this. I agree with all the kind comments above that your presence here is very much appreciated.
Wishing you a beautiful day, dear friend Mick