PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USAJan 4, 2010
Wonderfully written poem. How well said, "I only need what I should be." I love that. I will remember and hold on to those words. It's good to read from you again. Take care.
Skybow - vivid images...it spoke to me of freedom and letting go :) Thanks for sharing
SkybowOPapple valley, California USAJan 4, 2010
Thank you Pink, I was writing from my own experience, but also from seeing some young friends of mine who have been married for a long time and are troubled. The wife is getting restless and the husband is becoming a bully as she moves away from him. It hurts to see this as I love them both, writing is my way of exorcising ghosts I guess.
SkybowOPapple valley, California USAJan 4, 2010
Thanks Jazzy, that is what it is about really. Having the faith in yourself to let go of what is holding you back. Much appreciation for your comment.
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