Bowl of Cherries

If love was hiding in a bowl of cherries
Sweet and enticing, not like un-ripened berries
Could you pick it out, choose the one
Or would you fumble, unsure of some

How do you know where it could be?
If they were all plucked from a single tree
Would it be the one hiding, seeming shy?
Or the cherry that simply took your eye

Does hesitation make you unsure?
That love could hide if it was pure
Why wait, why not pick the fruit
What if its wrong, does not suit

Why choose, why not sample them all
Would you become the vain mans fool
What is the thought that holds you back?
You cannot sight feelings lying in the pack

Indecision will make it pass you on by
If the one that’s right you will not espy
Your heart, not eyes, will leave one in the bowl
For it is the one that shines, a radiant soul

For the answer is not the beauty of the skin
The outside tells you nothing of what lies within
True love can seem to hide in a single cherry
But beware, for the fruits of life are many
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Posted: Jan 2010
About this poem:
true, real love is sometimes hard to find!, for it can disguise itself!

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tennesseejudy
This caught my eye while I was talking about apples..
It is very very good. Very true also. Thank you.
Trecker
Great poem and so true. Looking at the outside, how will we know.
The hesitation, at times, can become unbarable, great stuff.
LynnC1955
OMG this is , "AMAZING!" applause cheering thumbs up

So true we are held back by fear. As once said, "One spoiled apple ruined the entire bunch!" For us that are genuine in who we are and the love we are so willing to share, we are not given a fair chance. It's hard to let down the walls of defense and take another chance to find love. Very hard when we have been hurt deeply in the past. Even though sometimes broken in appearance, the sweetness of love still resides within.

I love this poem!bouquet
Bentlee
So true Rob, good write with good wisdom:)
jazzy75
Rob...fantastic poem of life and love...truly one of my favorites :)danceline
Pinkpoetress
Rob,
Great poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Your words are so true. Thanks for sharing.
boyshchrm6
Excellent points Rob. This may sound silly, but I
wonder if looking at the pitts would help. No probably
not I've seen the pitts and not pretty...hey but love
isn't defined by beauty....Now I'm really Confusssed!!!lol
thumbs up dunno doh grin thanks cold snowman2 snowglobe
QuietStormF
Very wise and beautiful poem Rob !teddybear hug bouquet
trurorob
Thank you Judy for your kind words
rob
IvoryPetals
I'm speechless. This is one of best poems i ever read. applause applause thumbs up
maryjane86
I love this poem! Very nicely written.applause
trurorob
Thank you Trecker
keep well
rob
hedistuff
very nice write. so true. what it is that one fancies? can it be that one never knows til that day, until that time. then, spring certainly is eternal.
trurorob
Thank you Lynn,
sometimes it is hard to spot the right one, but you must take your chances
rob
trurorob
Thanks Jon, nice to see your prose again as well
rob
trurorob
Thank you Jazzy, i know you like this one a lot
rob
Kinderling
Loved your poem Rob, it covers all aspects of a difficult, illusive subject. Thank you.
jerseygirl49
Such wise words, Rob,
I think the problem comes, when it is automatic, when it comes to outer beauty, and physical attraction. But, on the other hand, it takes much time invested to get to the center of a tootsie pop!!grin Being that we are a give it to me now society of people..who dont think we have time, well then often we lose out ,for instant gratification!! Loved the poem!!cheering thanx for posting..JGwave peace grin
paloma66
Its awesome,amazing,so wonderfully portrayed,oh! Rob you are so good,I loved reading it and re-reading it.Yes outward appearances can be deceptive, its the inner being that counts.Appearances catch the eyes but beauty from within will capture the heart.Good luck to you Rob.
bouquet
trurorob
Thank you PinkP, kind words
rob
Blizza801
I Love this !! It has great imagery and I love the way you combine emotion and berries...very very cool
trurorob
Trust you to get the PIP Larry!!
Thanks
rob
trurorob
Thank you QSF much appreciated
rob
trurorob
Thank you my friend Ivorypetals a nice compliment.
rob
madeliene
Rob well done I loved your poem.
It's something that needed to be said.
A radiant sould is truely something to discern and I thank you for reminding me of that.wave
tknight19
Really enjoyed this poem.. Thanks!
dreamwolf5264
well said rob,i couldn't have said it any better,i guess we can be too picky when it comes to finding a date,we look at perfection,not whats in the persons heart,so we then choose to be lonely and miserable,i guess i'm guilty of this too!it's what society teaches us,what a shame!!...great poem,and keep writting.applause dancing wave
Milanda
thumbs up head banger I love your poem wink
trurorob
Thank you Maryjane, kind words.
rob
trurorob
Thank you hedistuff my friend, sometimes uncertainty can be a cruel factor.
rob
purpledragonfly
banana Great poem. brilliant way with the words. Just very clever.banana
trurorob
Thank you kinderling, kind words.
rob
trurorob
Thank you Nancy!
Hope your tootsie pop is a good one!
rob
purpledragonfly
I read your Bowl Of Cherries again ... It is a facinating poem!!!! I'm full already!!! Feel like I'm eating it as I read it and love it's true meaning!!! brilliant!! Have a banana....!!!banana peace x.
NeverEndingStory
I do love your poem rob it's brilliant. The ex said to me that it's not often someone gets a second pick at the cherries. What if the tables are turned though. A good Cherry can be battered and bruised then left alone to go rotten. Nobody ever wants the rotten ones, put back in the bowl and damaged so not so sweet. Well except another worm ey??

Beautiful poem, rob, honest ^_^

teddybear
kittykat1492
omg this is one of the best poems ive ever read!! u should seriously think of becoming a poetry writer
trurorob
Thank you Paloma my friend, glad you enjoyed it!
rob
Happygolucky4u
I will never look at a bowl of cherries the same again. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. It was a beautiful.
trurorob
Thanks Blizza, kind words
rob
trurorob
Thank you Madeliene, kind words
rob
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