You are the most beautiful woman to ever grace the face of this earth... Only God Himself will ever know just how much I love you... For there are no words in existence that can describe my love for you... I fear that it is only in heaven that I may be able to show you...
Like babies wrapped in linens of lace and ribbons... Strewn about in fields of velvet green grass... Bringing a pureness of joy never felt before... Blossoming into flowers with colors that never existed... A perfect union of souls and bodies...
In supple dreams of mysteriously colored leaves... My adoration is indescribable... I would suffer for the rest of eternity... Just to hold you once... Just to feel you close... Just to let you know how much you are to me...
I will continue to tolerate my misery and loneliness... For as long as necessary.... For there is no substitute for your flawless perfection... I will wait for your immortality in this fallen mortal state.... Never settling for anyone else...
I've never heard of love deeper than this. Such pure devotion and you captured it too well in your verses. On the other hand Christian, it somehow made me wonder if you are being a bit too hard on yourself... it might be that she's happier to see you happy rather than live in misery my friend...
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKMay 23, 2014
For there is no substitute for your flawless perfection... I will wait for your immortality in this fallen mortal state.... Never settling for anyone else...
I love this most excellent poem Christian - Raw passion - only to be sated on the other side - One of the best poems I have read in a long time.
Terrific write brother Christian, and such depth of emotion felt in it " In supple dreams...my adoration is indescribable...Just to let you know how much you are to me..." Gr8 verse. Joseph
Hello Laura. ......In absence of your presence, I do hope you are doing well. Thanks for you lovely comment.
ImagineLoveVenus, Montana USAOct 16, 2014
Liam, this is out of this world deep!
Like babies wrapped in linens of lace and ribbons... Strewn about in fields of velvet green grass... Bringing a pureness of joy never felt before... Blossoming into flowers with colors that never existed... A perfect union of souls and bodies...
So beautiful and touching!!!!
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoOct 17, 2014
I felt the emotion in this one Christian.Very soulful passionate piece of penmanship. Really enjoyed the journey.
Christian...Depth of emotion,beautiful description "flowers with colors that never existed"....You have set your heart on a course... hope "she" is waiting.
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Ren
I will wait for your immortality in this fallen mortal state....
Never settling for anyone else...
I love this most excellent poem Christian - Raw passion - only to be sated on the other side - One of the best poems I have read in a long time.
I've a feeling she's as thrilled to know.
Take care C. Settling for no other as not an option, at least she needs to know.
Thanks for a lovely write
Phyllis
This is just an incredibly
beautiful poem.
In my humble opinion,
Your best write to date !
Mick.
Like babies wrapped in linens of lace and ribbons...
Strewn about in fields of velvet green grass...
Bringing a pureness of joy never felt before...
Blossoming into flowers with colors that never existed...
A perfect union of souls and bodies...
So beautiful and touching!!!!
This is a stunning poem to read
She is a very lucky girl to have such a loving poem written in her honor
Thank you for sharing
Martina xxx
This is so awesome, It's so rare to find.
.... beautiful dedication and admiration....
May the sweet memories hold u strong
This is a special piece of work !
Hope life is treating you well....
Regards Mick.
Kathy
Madelyn