I Will Wait For You

You are the most beautiful woman to ever grace the face of this earth...
Only God Himself will ever know just how much I love you...
For there are no words in existence that can describe my love for you...
I fear that it is only in heaven that I may be able to show you...

Like babies wrapped in linens of lace and ribbons...
Strewn about in fields of velvet green grass...
Bringing a pureness of joy never felt before...
Blossoming into flowers with colors that never existed...
A perfect union of souls and bodies...

In supple dreams of mysteriously colored leaves...
My adoration is indescribable...
I would suffer for the rest of eternity...
Just to hold you once...
Just to feel you close...
Just to let you know how much you are to me...

I will continue to tolerate my misery and loneliness...
For as long as necessary....
For there is no substitute for your flawless perfection...
I will wait for your immortality in this fallen mortal state....
Never settling for anyone else...
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Posted: May 2014

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Spartacus2012
Cool dedication write Christian..This one rocks!

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Girlygirl196349
Christian- - THIS IS SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL! ! hug cheering angel
darkhorse555
i tip my hat christian beautifully crafted piece loved it dear friendangel cheers
orientalkoru
I've never heard of love deeper than this. Such pure devotion and you captured it too well in your verses. On the other hand Christian, it somehow made me wonder if you are being a bit too hard on yourself... it might be that she's happier to see you happy rather than live in misery my friend... angel thumbs up
Odette67
For there is no substitute for your flawless perfection...
I will wait for your immortality in this fallen mortal state....
Never settling for anyone else...


I love this most excellent poem Christian - Raw passion - only to be sated on the other side - One of the best poems I have read in a long time. thumbs up angel purple heart
lindsyjonesonline today!
C I couldn't agree more with my friend OK, I just want to add, let her know.

I've a feeling she's as thrilled to know.

Take care C. Settling for no other as not an option, at least she needs to know.

Thanks for a lovely write

Phyllis
Joseph1112
Terrific write brother Christian, and such depth of emotion felt in it " In supple dreams...my adoration is indescribable...Just to let you know how much you are to me..." Gr8 verse. Joseph handshake cheers
Mizzy4
Christian.
This is just an incredibly
beautiful poem.
In my humble opinion,
Your best write to date !
Mick.

applause wow thumbs up
candykid
Thank you everyone for your kind and specific comments. ....thumbs up
candykid
I truly thank you Ken for that fine comment brother, it is much appreciated.
candykid
Hello Laura. ......In absence of your presence, I do hope you are doing well. Thanks for you lovely comment.
ImagineLove
Liam, this is out of this world deep!angel

Like babies wrapped in linens of lace and ribbons...
Strewn about in fields of velvet green grass...
Bringing a pureness of joy never felt before...
Blossoming into flowers with colors that never existed...
A perfect union of souls and bodies...


So beautiful and touching!!!! hug purple heart
Poetnumber1
I felt the emotion in this one Christian.Very soulful passionate piece of penmanship. Really enjoyed the journey.

cheers
candykid
Mick dear friend. ...I so appreciate your comment and hope that you can read this and choose to return at some point.....thanks Mick.cheers
candykid
Joseph, thanks....miss u too brother.cheers
avias
Christian...Depth of emotion,beautiful description "flowers with colors that never existed"....You have set your heart on a course... hope "she" is waiting.hug thumbs up
candykid
Thank you Christina. ....I miss your presence here. ...purple heart
candykid
Thanks Liam. ...
candykid
Thank you Kathy. ....miss you too....
candykid
Thanks Phyllis. .....purple heart
rapturecapture
Hi Candy

This is a stunning poem to read
She is a very lucky girl to have such a loving poem written in her honor

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxx hug teddybear bouquet
123whisper
Passionate and beautiful peace handshake
thumbs up
angel99999online today!
Hi candykid,

This is so awesome,thumbs up It's so rare to find.
.... beautiful dedication and admiration....


May the sweet memories hold u strong handshake

angel
candykid
Harriet. ....I am truly humbled by that kind and specific feedback. ....Thank you so much.
Mizzy4
Some poems deserve a second visit Christian,
This is a special piece of work !

Hope life is treating you well....

Regards Mick. handshake
candykid
Martina. ....my Dearest Irish friend, thanks for your lovely feedback. cheers
candykid
Joseph. ...thanks bro...
godsprincessonline today!
Very beautiful - what true love should be. Wonderfully written. Thank you for sharing.

Kathy teddybear
candykid
Mick. .... cheers
doglover14
Your writings are new to me, but this was perhaps the most beautiful tribute I have ever read. Thank you,
Madelyn
Bajanshay
A www this is just sublime! I really hope you have met her.hug
candykid
Thank you for that beautiful comment Angel.....heart beating
candykid
Thank you Kathy....Happy Sunday...purple heart
angel99999online today!
This is beautiful!applause
bard76
Explain, I don't get it... Not even written well.... Xx
candykid
Well David, if I have to explain it, you'll probably never "get it."
candykid
Angel, I thank you kindly once again for that lovely comment.
candykid
Sharon....I kindly thank you, and appreciate our interactions on FB......purple heart
candykid
Doglover......I do apologize for my tardiness in response to your comment. Thank you dearly...purple heart
candykid
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