~Lakeside~

Split in half sun over water it crests. Heels of my feet on cedar in full rest. Mug in the hand steamin coffee rests on legs. Mirrored water breakfast ripples of fish that'll bite. Morning mist paints the air over water six feet high. Shore to shore echoes the Loon's day begins. Dog on the dock refract's spears of sun. A mouthful of coffee to take it all in~
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Posted: Jan 2010

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luvuluvme2
Bentlee, very peaceful. TY.thumbs up hug angel
QuietStormF
Serene and peaceful.. nice work Bentlee ! teddybear
QuietStormF
Actually it brings to mind my poem.. New Day Dawning... very similar in a way..both peaceful and serene.. applause hug teddybear
trurorob
pour me a cup Jon, cheers!!
rob
Bentlee
Yes ty Luvu definately an element of tranquility there an a place I've experienced countless times :)
Bentlee
Thanks Q S times like that I feel many of us like to have as much as we can. Letting the mind relax awhile:)
Bentlee
Rob, coffee's poured an always an extra chair is there for my friends. Cheers:)
Pinkpoetress
Bentlee,
I'm having coffee now as I take in this wonderful, peaceful poem. Nice work!
boyshchrm6
Definitely reminds me of one morning
at a cottage resort N. Ontario when
I was up early to catch bass with
a cup of hot chocolate.(No I had a rod for
the bass, the hc was for me!)cool angel thumbs up cheers
jazzy75
To be present in such a moment is a true treasure. Thanks Bentlee for sharing the peace and contentment :)gift teddybear
Bentlee
Ty Pink, glad you found the moment in this :)
Bentlee
Boysh thats exactly where this is written about. I spent many mornings this way as well. :) ty for commenting an enjoying it.
Bentlee
Jazzy it truly is the ultimate in relax and an amazing way to bring in the day :) ty my friend:)
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