Baby Girl

I shouldn't call you my baby girl
but that is what you are to me
with a strong head full of curl
you were wild as a tomboy should be

you were always curious about life
I taught you as best as I could
about people, love, and like
values, morals and respect
religion and riding a bike

I let you get away with a lot
too much trust I admit
hoping you would decide like you should
still knowing I couldn't count on it

I don't like the life that you're living
and I will tell you whenever we talk
just look around at what you are missing
clear your head girl go for a walk

now you don't answer my text nor my call
I have to let you grow up on your own
cannot be there to pick you up when you fall
I just hope you won't be alone

we all have to make our own mistakes
everything happens for a reason right?
life lessons learned whatever it takes
you need to fight your own fight

I wish I could hold and protect you
like I did when you were younger
you a big girl you know what I taught you
and when the time is right you'll remember
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jan 2010
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to my daughter

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Pinkpoetress
luvuluvme,
Your daughter should be proud of this poem and treasure it forever. It is so beautiful and touching. She is one lucky girl and I can tell how much you love her. Thanks for sharing. Take care.
luvuluvme2
Pinkpoetress, thank you for your kind words, I do hope I can show this poem to her sometime soon. hug bouquet angel
trurorob
must have hurt to write this, but understand the emotions, I have the same with my eldest son.
rob
luvuluvme2
Rob, thank you for understanding, once a parent always a parent...
doh dancing angel
jazzy75
luvuluvme2 - true heartful emotions and poem...love how you ended it "when the time is right you'll remember"applause applause
luvuluvme2
TY, Jazzy. I just hope she will remember. hug sigh angel
luvuluvme2
Thank you, Boyshchrm. I hope you are right. hug beer angel
Bentlee
ty Luvu for writing and posting this as it reflected to my daughter and me in some times of light trials as I 'm sure there'll be more too. conversing wine yay
luvuluvme2
Bentlee, thank you. I know with children, especially girls, there will be trials and errors. we will have to let them learn how to fly and be there to catch them before they hit ground. I learned the hard way. good luck to you and your daughter. hug angel
paloma66
I know how this feels,children do not realize our love,they will someday.My heart reaches out to you.Have a happy Valentine's day.angel hug
luvuluvme2
Paloma, yes you are so right. I have to learn not to drive myself crazy thinking about my youngest. She sure is a piece of work, but according to my mom so was I. lol. Thank you.
hug shock laugh angel
Octopus2010
I wish i could write like that, its a great poem to all the daughters out there. I would like to keep this so i could read it to my daughter one day. angel
purpledragonfly
HI THERE. WE HURT AND SOMETIMES OUR CHILDREN DON'T KNOW, BUT WE ALWAYS LOVE THEM. THE WORDS REFLECT A SAD TIME. NICE POEM THOUGH.

My Valentine one ... Not the loosing of a love as a defeat. I should of described it differently and I will changed some of the info as I realise I've explained myself not how I meant to do. Good Luck with your poems.
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