I shouldn't call you my baby girl but that is what you are to me with a strong head full of curl you were wild as a tomboy should be
you were always curious about life I taught you as best as I could about people, love, and like values, morals and respect religion and riding a bike
I let you get away with a lot too much trust I admit hoping you would decide like you should still knowing I couldn't count on it
I don't like the life that you're living and I will tell you whenever we talk just look around at what you are missing clear your head girl go for a walk
now you don't answer my text nor my call I have to let you grow up on your own cannot be there to pick you up when you fall I just hope you won't be alone
we all have to make our own mistakes everything happens for a reason right? life lessons learned whatever it takes you need to fight your own fight
I wish I could hold and protect you like I did when you were younger you a big girl you know what I taught you and when the time is right you'll remember
PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USAJan 21, 2010
luvuluvme, Your daughter should be proud of this poem and treasure it forever. It is so beautiful and touching. She is one lucky girl and I can tell how much you love her. Thanks for sharing. Take care.
luvuluvme2OPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaJan 21, 2010
Pinkpoetress, thank you for your kind words, I do hope I can show this poem to her sometime soon.
ty Luvu for writing and posting this as it reflected to my daughter and me in some times of light trials as I 'm sure there'll be more too.
luvuluvme2OPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaFeb 11, 2010
Bentlee, thank you. I know with children, especially girls, there will be trials and errors. we will have to let them learn how to fly and be there to catch them before they hit ground. I learned the hard way. good luck to you and your daughter.
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandFeb 11, 2010
I know how this feels,children do not realize our love,they will someday.My heart reaches out to you.Have a happy Valentine's day.
luvuluvme2OPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaFeb 12, 2010
Paloma, yes you are so right. I have to learn not to drive myself crazy thinking about my youngest. She sure is a piece of work, but according to my mom so was I. lol. Thank you.
Octopus2010leeds, West Yorkshire, England UKFeb 12, 2010
I wish i could write like that, its a great poem to all the daughters out there. I would like to keep this so i could read it to my daughter one day.
purpledragonflyLeeds, West Yorkshire, England UKFeb 13, 2010
HI THERE. WE HURT AND SOMETIMES OUR CHILDREN DON'T KNOW, BUT WE ALWAYS LOVE THEM. THE WORDS REFLECT A SAD TIME. NICE POEM THOUGH.
My Valentine one ... Not the loosing of a love as a defeat. I should of described it differently and I will changed some of the info as I realise I've explained myself not how I meant to do. Good Luck with your poems.
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Your daughter should be proud of this poem and treasure it forever. It is so beautiful and touching. She is one lucky girl and I can tell how much you love her. Thanks for sharing. Take care.
rob
My Valentine one ... Not the loosing of a love as a defeat. I should of described it differently and I will changed some of the info as I realise I've explained myself not how I meant to do. Good Luck with your poems.