Am I not the king within my virtual domain? My own demons have I conquered, slain I have sat in the breeze with gentle Lions Wrestled the consequences of my own desires Lived with many ire’s Do I resent or anger at the greedy beast He has more, should I have not least I choose my pathway for I built the walls That secluded you gaining my entirety I cannot give you the pleasure of completeness I remain aloft above the rising cloud of humility I suffer not from personal ingenuity For I have stroked the beast of my history Dwelt in the passages of mental blindness Broken down the walls within my Jericho And tamed the Tigers of solitary illusion I closed the rent, suffered my own conclusion I built the windows of my sight I made the castle I enclosed around the moat I made myself For this I shoulder the blame Nobody else will hold me prisoner I ask no more than to be allowed to be myself
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Posted: Feb 2010
About this poem:
Why is it some people want you to be what you dont want to be. I made myself and I am happy with that, despite the issues!.
hi truorob love your poem i see many sights within it and im sorry im not awfully good at reading meanings of others poems sometimes and il admit i even have to read them sometimes to think i know, I CANNOT GIVE YOU THE PLEASURE OF COMPLETENESS ... im reading and reading to figure out why, and all i can wonder is why not? is it because your married to another already or is it because of something else, dont you like yourself if im reading it all wrong, just ignore me and il go away
Thanks Itchywitch i understand that you could read it as that I cannot give you my whole because I am with someone else but I didn't mean it that way. I think that I meant that others want to take over and control your life and because they cant and you cannot allow it it leaves them feeling incomplete, all you ever want is to be allowed to be yourself and live and let live when others want to control you and dominate and seem to know what is best for you. When to me in fact they don't even know what is best for themselves, I hope this makes some sense, everybody is an individual and should be allowed to express themselves that way without the influence of others on their lives. Thanks for the comment Rob
AyhraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaSep 23, 2011
Nice writing trurorob. If we can't be oursleves, what else :)
itchywitchgalway, Galway IrelandSep 23, 2011
thank you rob for the explanation and because you have i can see it alittle clearer now... its the most intriquing poem iv ever read
Thanks again Itchywitch, I suppose when I wrote it I had so many people telling me what was best for my life, when in fact I have always known whats best for me as we all should as individuals. rob
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i understand that you could read it as that I cannot give you my whole because I am with someone else but I didn't mean it that way. I think that I meant that others want to take over and control your life and because they cant and you cannot allow it it leaves them feeling incomplete, all you ever want is to be allowed to be yourself and live and let live when others want to control you and dominate and seem to know what is best for you. When to me in fact they don't even know what is best for themselves, I hope this makes some sense, everybody is an individual and should be allowed to express themselves that way without the influence of others on their lives.
Thanks for the comment
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