~~~Forever Friends.~~~

When ever I shrug off this mortal coil,
My broken finger nails to lose their hold,
On pallid brow you'll kiss the embalming oil,
And your warm tears shall ease my parched lips cold.

I wish you to know before I'm lowered to clay,
Our love bond will always remain unbroken,
In life not once did we our souls betray,
Fond words now to remain forever unspoken.

Should ever you feel a breeze upon your face,
I pray you now that 'tis my lonesome breath,
Such haunting wind your figure to embrace,
I beg you think of me ! ...but not my death.

I once thought of you as I kissed a rose,
Oh! How the taste brought you so vividly near,
I cry you do the same, from still repose,
A single dew drop fall....perhaps my tear.

I always shadowed you like valiant Knight.
I'd rip steel doors down with my bare hands,
Should anyone ruffle your hair, or cause you plight,
I'd fight strong to protect each precious strand.

Hold dear in your dreams, memories so pure,
So as to ne'er feel lonely, my beautiful friend,
I would for you this day, death hap'ly endure,
Our love sacrosanct, until worlds end !
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2014
About this poem:
Thanks to the lovely comments and kindness
of my poet friends....I will be a "weekend member"
for a while.....I'll try hard to catch up !

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Spartacus2012
Good write Mick..Nice to have you back..

Kenwave
candykid
I'd rip steel doors down with my bare hands,
Should anyone ruffle your hair, or cause you plight,
I'd fight strong to protect each precious strand.

F yes Mick..........I love it bro......it sometimes pays to be optimistic. ....;-)..........thumbs up cheers
Joseph1112
Hey Mick glad for yr return, missed reading yr awesome writes. Excellent as always, perfect rhythm and flow, what a joy to read, and wonderful tribute my friend, be blessed! J handshake applause
fjamesj9701
Am I good or what. I told you that you would be back, I think Im going to get a crystal ball and a funny hat to go with my predicting skillsprofessor Seriously though Mr Sir Mick this is truly a moving and valiant piece. I give you the highest marine salute to your courage, bravery, and heart my friend. Much love, respect, and admiration…Jessehandshake
reguiny2006
Hello Mick , As usual your poetic gift shines through, Phil.cheers
Poetnumber1
I knew you couldn't stay away for to long Mick. very happy Excellent stuff with an impeccable flow. Enjoyed the read. cheers
Ahyra
Nice poem M, nice to read you. Wishing you a lovely Sunday bouquet
soulgoddess
wave rose joy WOW! This is one melting masterpiece poetry!
Flowers may just bloom from your fingers, warmed by your caring palms into sunlight. And when sunset comes, they still continue to blossom simply because of your presence.

This blew my mind
rose
JEANIEMAC
Just don't go off and die on us midweek now....
JEANIEMAC
All joking aside...
This poem is truly beautiful.
The bond that joins is far from physical.
I have experienced telepathy with my daughters, only once, with each, when they were small children.
Unbelievably, last week, it happened again, in one week, with the two oldest.
What this means to me, is the bond we had before the breakup,
has been renewed. Thank you God.
Mizzy4online today!
Really nice to be part of this
Flowering garden, Ken.
Cheers.......Mick.

beer
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I'm so glad you enjoyed this
Christian,
Thank you.........Mick.

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Your comment is always
Uplifting Joseph,
Appreciated much......Mick.

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I salute your fine comment Jesse,
Inspiring as always......Mick.

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lindsyjones
Hold dear in your dreams, memories so pure,
So as to ne'er feel lonely, my beautiful friend,
I would for you this day, death hap'ly endure,
Our love sacrosanct, until worlds end !


My dear Mick, a fellow survivor of mine, a very encrypting word for friendship that no time and or dark storms can break... sacrosanct it is...

Thanks my friend...
123whisper
Wowow....such innocent purity of love,loyalthy,adoration,so Divine wine I really enjoyed to read every word and thank you for sharing beautiful poem teddybear
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Thanks for your kindness Phil.
Mick.

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darkhorse555
i applaud your style beautifully written excellent piece of writing i tip my hat mick dear friend grin angel
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Thank you M.M.
for your nice compliment....
There is a magnetism on the corner
that's unavoidable.
Mick.

buddies
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Nice to hear from you Ahyra !
Regards........Mick.

wave
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I'm chuffed with your
huge reaction Angeline......
Surpasses my expectations !
Very grateful............Mick.

hug purple heart hug
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Glad you enjoyed my poem Jeanie,
The telepathy story is nice !
Mick.

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Thank you Phyllis for
your comment.......
A word for special occasions !
Mick.

angel
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Thank you Thea,
For your heartfelt comment.
Mick.

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SnowCoveredMuse
Mick,

Amazing, genuine
did I say amazing?

I love it, I have missed
your pen!

~SAS~heart wings
Macduff5
Hi Mick,

A beautifully written romantic piece. Well conceived and hauntingly memorable. Best wishes, Rob. wine
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Liam my friend, thank you for
your great comment !
Mick.

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Your comment is much appreciated
SAS, Thank you.......Mick.

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Odette67
Mick! My dearest friend,
This poem is breathtakingly beautiful - I never tire of reading your excellent poems.
hug purple heart x
123whisper
I always look forward to read your heart warm poems teddybear
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Thanks Rob, for your special comment.
Regards Mick.

wave
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Dearest Christina,
You've made my day
with such an awesome comment !
Your friend always......
Mick.

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Thanks again Thea,
For your great compliment .
Mick.


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rapturecapture
Hi Mick

Well what can I say.. just Pure Class!

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxxteddybear hug wave
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Thank you Martina,
For your special comment.
I'm so glad you liked it........Mick.

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soulgoddess
hug Wishing you well dear friend hug
Is there a way to send you a friendly message?
soulgoddess
angel Message sent! I hope you can receive it! angel
godsprincess
Beautiful poem - oh to have such a loving devoted friend. Thank you for sharing.

Kathy teddybear
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Thank you Angeline....
Nice to see you,

Regards Mick.

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Thank you Kathy,
For your kind comment...

Regards Mick.

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