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Wounded !......not Fatally.

A lonesome wind now murmurs on the hill,
It moans a tale of woe in Nature's ear,
About a love that tasted bitter pill,
And now forlorn, must emptiness endear.

A man now droops his head beneath a cross,
One lonely snowdrop bowed, sad tears to spill,
He prays that God will heal the scars of loss,
And mind always, the girl that he loves still.

A new fire in his soul starts burning wild,
He must find love anew, lest all is lost,
Fresh lips to quench the flames from hearts beguiled,
The embers of past love to bear the cost.

Her soft kiss blown on gentle breeze so frail,
When passion comes 'twill ride on howling gale !
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Posted: Jul 2014
About this poem:
This is about having to move on from
the person that you love..
when they find someone else.

Heart breaking but essential !

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Comments (29)

Spartacus2012
Good write Mick..Thanks for the share!

Regards,

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JEANIEMAC
I think I need new glasses Mick.
But I could read it well enough to know you need a hug
candykid
You have a super style Mick that differs greatly from western counterparts. I love to read your words, for they are a window into a world that I have never had the fortunate pleasure of ever visiting in real life.......nice job pal......cheers
Poetnumber1
Dreamy poem Mick. How it echoes the sadness that lingers of a love lost.cheers
Macduff5
Hi Mick,

A lovely sonnet. Moving on...the hardest thing in any relationship.
cheers
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Know where you are coming from here Mick, well expressed.
Rob
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Know where you are coming from here Mick, well expressed.
Rob
Redex
Your sad poem was a true reflection of your feelings, but it held a glimmer of you you are still optimistic in moving on that's the biggest message. Well done youapplause
Fellsman
Fine sonneteering Mick, it's as well the wounds aren't fatal - which doesn't necessarily mean the scars ever heal. A really terrific closing couplet.

Regards

Bill
lindsyjones
How are you my dear friend. This is sad and full of emotions depicting our being so hurt but I am sure it will get better..
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Thanks for your kindness Ken.
Regards ......Mick.

beer
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I'm OK Jeanie,
Thanks for hug .....
Mick.

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Odette67
To me moving on from my last relationship was the best thing I ever did - wish I had done it sooner. Still, when memories are good - we will hold on to them for ever.
As ever dear Mick your poetry never fails to touch me. hug purple heart
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Thank you Christian,
For the really gracious comment.
Regards Mick.

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Thanks M,
Always welcome......Mick.

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Cheers Rob for the nice comment.
Mick.
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Glad you liked it Rob.
Mick.

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Thanks for seeing the bright side
Redex,,......... Mick.
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Thanks Bill,
Sure aren't I a past pupil from the
Fellsman University of great Sonnets,
I can still remember your assistant
Chrissie......she used cane my butt
for misspellings.....I deliberately
made mistakes. rolling on the floor laughing
Mick.
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orientalkoru
Know the feeling... The painful stages everyone goes through...but others heal sooner than others ...or do'they? Lovely sonnet Mick! I am in awe of you sonnet writing guys .. Only managed to write a couple of sonnets so far... It looks like I missed out on The Fellsman's University of Great Sonnets...it would have helped me a lot professor
SnowCoveredMuse
Mick,

I love your style
A pleasure, tho it be sad,
I love reading your words!

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No worries Phyllis,
I'm good.........Mick.

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Dear Christina,
It's all progress.......
I actually like change,
Thanks for your uplifting review,
Kind regards.......Mick.x

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Greatly appreciate your kind
comments Kathy,
Regards ......Mick.

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I'm pleased that you liked
this SAS,
Regards......Mick.

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Joseph1112
Hi Mick i too have enjoyed reading your sonnets and this one is equally good, sad but hopeful, lovely, Jhandshake
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Thank you Joseph,
Your reviews are
always welcome !
Mick.

thanks
Girlygirl196349
comfort hug Time time time it heals all wounds ! I wish you all the happiness in the world my dear friend .hug hug cheering angel
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Cheers Laura,
For the nice wishes,
Regards Mick.

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