The only thing that matters in this cursed dark universe... Are things unseen in sick dark dreams that bring what surely hurts... Invisible stars too far to reach elude me every time... Dark matter is the element that can make your dark stars shine...
I love the feel of stardust when it falls upon my face... I love to steal the taste you place in places of dark space... I hate the feel of gravity when it pushes me away... Away from you, my love so true, away from your embrace....
I saw a show on 60 minutes about meteors and learned there are over a million that are 40 yards wide and one of these hits about every 100 years, the last two being in Russia, each capable of taking out a city if they were to hit one.
Hello Morgen. While I am not sure which poem of yours that you are referring to, I would love to read it. Perhaps you could send me the link. Thanks for your feedback.
Even "dark matter" can make dark stars shine...and "feel of stardust when it falls upon my face"....beautiful thoughts describing love in a journey beyond the ordinary.
diana_1San fernando, San Fernando Trinidad and TobagoJan 7, 2015
Beautiful poem love it from the start to the finish captivating....
Christian - very meaningful poem. I wish everyone in the Universe could understand and appreciate good poetry. This corner of the Universe should be a more sacred place where we can come and share our feelings and thoughts in a respectful manner.
Thanks for sharing Christian.
Kathy
wayne34liverpool, Merseyside, England UKJul 3, 2016
Without dark matter no gravity where would we be cool write xandy kid
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Thanks for the read..Happy fourth of July my dear brother.
Ken
beautifully Christian,
Enjoyable read.......
Mick.
Away from you, my love so true, away from your embrace....
A touchingly beautiful poem Christian.
Kid,
amazingly said!
~SAS~
Darkness is something
I can do without
Be good to steal replace it with light fir sure.
Thanks for sharing Christian.
Kathy
Kathy