In A Blink Of An Eye

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Beneath the low muffles
Pedestrians shuffle
An average city day
Of hustle and bustle
A lovely days stroll
With no place to go
Still the worlds moving fast
But I'll remain slow
Because theres no movement
Unless I stand still
To give my heart a chance
To understand what it feels
The brilliance of designs
Engineered by our minds
And yet we lack passion
To save our own lives
Surveying the pavement
To the edge of concrete
When I became overwhelmed
By this vision I'd seen
It was for a brief moment
Yet I was surprised
When I saw her blue eyes
Staring back into mine
Butterflies came to life
It was love at first sight
Our approach became closer
And once again were her eyes
I felt a connection
Free from suggestions
Connected like dots
Lost in translation
But what I seen was a world
For this boy and that girl
Behind a white picket fence
And all this from a curb
Could she be the one
As the cat held my tongue
I brought the words to my lips
But my voice became numb
Them damn butterflies
They took me for a ride
I may be made of steel
But Im like butter inside
So without knowing her name
The light color changed
Then they all crossed the street
Moving on in their haste
She disappeared in a blur
Blending in with the world
And there I was standing
All alone on the curb
But with a smile I left
Without chance of regret
Or what if I spoke
The words my heart said
Still overjoyed with delight
It just wasn't our time
And she was gone from my life
In a blink of an eye

~ JJF ~
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Posted: Jul 2014
About this poem:
A thing of beauty is a joy forever: its loveliness increases; it will never pass into nothingness
~ John Keats ~
What we have here ladies and gentlemen is simply a failure to communicate … Cheers cheers

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Mizzy4online today!
Keats is one of my favourites Jesse,
But so are you !
I enjoyed your poem this morning........
Mick.

wave conversing
fjamesj9701
Same here Sir Mick and A thing Of Beauty is one of my favorites. A lot of passion in his writes like you my friend. Just thought I would try something different. was shooting for a type of spoken poetry, but never end in the direction I aim lol. Me? a favorite of yours though,? Im humbled coming from one of the greats like you. Thank you my friend, much love and cheers … jesse handshake
Macduff5
Hi Jessie,

Well while we're talking Keats, this one just seems to have an element of the "La Belle Dame, Sans Merci" about it. Though a much happier ending I'm glad to say. What did Keats say: "beauty is truth; truth beauty/That is all you need to know and ever will know." Excuse my loose quoting. Nicely done my friend.wine wine
Poetnumber1
Nicely crafted my friend! A bit different from the way you write but all the more it was well worth the read.thumbs up
candykid
Oh yes, this happened to me several times, except it was at the Shibuya intersection in Tokyo, and her eyes were black not blue.
Actually it was just in my dreams. ....nice one Jes'thumbs up
Girlygirl196349
Great poem ! hug cheering angel wave
Joseph1112
Well done brother, superb writing, you took me there the moment and I've been there too many times, regrettably, me butter too! Jhandshake
Spartacus2012
Well done Mr Jesse..Or should I say "Cool hand Jesse" lol

Kenhandshake
madtat29
Totally spoken..i could hear it as i read it..like something i would spit...mad props amigo...thumbs up
fjamesj9701
Thank you all so much for your positive vibes. Although im late on the response I hope u all know I always hold my friends here and their thoughts in high regards.... Cheers and much love... Jessehandshakecheers
shadow1950
very powerful poem totally captivating from first line Sir James excellent hugs
fjamesj9701
Thank you very much Miss LShadow and I am so glad you stopped by. Always a pleasure. Cheers and Merry Christmas…Jesse OKoshirowine
ImagineLove
angel2
What a great story and descriptive correlations throughout, loved reading this, nicely penned! writing purple heart
fjamesj9701
Thank you try much Miss Imagine for your time and your thoughts. Always a pleasure… Jessewine
CelticPoet12
NICE!~ What was that you said about being some guy who writes. Well, pieces like this come from the heart and nowhere else, and a poet shares his or her life expereinces. This is how we relate to each other. I wish you joy and pen to paper always. Blessed be and thank you for giving me some inspiration. I really want to write tonight and I may just have to make some time. Celtic
snowman2
CelticPoet12
Sorry Jesse, can't spell tonight to save myself. LOL. LONG day!~
fjamesj9701
Thank you much My Celtic Lady.. Lol, yep even if I have grown out my hair Im still just some bald guy writing . Thank you again …Jesse wine
bard76
Wow, beautiful stuff bloke....awesome write, didn't want it to end....David.....
fjamesj9701
Thank you much for a most encouraging comment my friend.. Cheers as always… Jesse
madtat29
Just reread this and I gotta say bro...no smoke up the a**....this is fantastic...mad props and mad love in the new year
itchywitch
As always ...
such a beautiful poem & a joy to read bowing
rusticbink
Wow, A poem with a real good story!
fjamesj9701
Perhaps is never too late to say thank you Sir Tat its just been a while. Much love my WCB ... CHEERScheers
southmiami4321online today!
How sometimes when eyes meet it electrifies you. Enjoyed every line. Beautiful write and made my day. Words out of your mouth doesn't say everything but communication is important too. wave
fjamesj9701
Thank you very much Miss SouthM. I appreciate your time and views... Much love ... Jesse
Happygolucky4u
They say the eyes are the windows to the soul. I so enjoyed this poem. rose
fjamesj9701
Hi Happy , its always a pleasure to see a coastal treasure such as you .. Cheers and much love, thank you... Jesse
Nuwahri61
Hiya Jesse........I seem to have missed this moment in time classicly described by you ..........I think its great people are digging up past writes and reposting ......there was a time here everyone's poems were flat out lasting half a day and they would turn over to page two there were that many people posting ...he he ...now you can come back three days later and there still on page 1.....anyway mate it's awesome to capture some of your earlier works ..........always a fan ......Love and regards from Kathy and I thumbs up
fjamesj9701
First and foremost, great to hear from you my friend. Thank you for your energy and time as always. It seems through the years of being single I try to emerge and these moments are far more reoccurring than before. It seemed I had so much game I needed a referee in my time lol. But that's just it I've put them games away and I'm ready for a world I've not sincerely met before so patience must be a virus.. Well thank you again and give my regards to Kathy will you.. Cheers mate . Much love... Jesse :handshake:
fjamesj9701
First and foremost, great to hear from you my friend. Thank you for your energy and time as always. It seems through the years of being single I try to emerge and these moments are far more reoccurring than before. It seemed I had so much game I needed a referee in my time lol. But that's just it I've put them games away and I'm ready for a world I've not sincerely met before so patience must be a virus.. Well thank you again and give my regards to Kathy will you.. Cheers mate . Much love... Jesse :handshake:
fjamesj9701
A virtue not a virus, at least in this context... Cheers again
jonE2tone
Been a while but good work . I Saw you perform this piece at a 2016 benefit in St Louis . Bravo btw sorry I just got around to telling youbeer
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