Beneath the low muffles
Pedestrians shuffle
An average city day
Of hustle and bustle
A lovely days stroll
With no place to go
Still the worlds moving fast
But I'll remain slow
Because theres no movement
Unless I stand still
To give my heart a chance
To understand what it feels
The brilliance of designs
Engineered by our minds
And yet we lack passion
To save our own lives
Surveying the pavement
To the edge of concrete
When I became overwhelmed
By this vision I'd seen
It was for a brief moment
Yet I was surprised
When I saw her blue eyes
Staring back into mine
Butterflies came to life
It was love at first sight
Our approach became closer
And once again were her eyes
I felt a connection
Free from suggestions
Connected like dots
Lost in translation
But what I seen was a world
For this boy and that girl
Behind a white picket fence
And all this from a curb
Could she be the one
As the cat held my tongue
I brought the words to my lips
But my voice became numb
Them damn butterflies
They took me for a ride
I may be made of steel
But Im like butter inside
So without knowing her name
The light color changed
Then they all crossed the street
Moving on in their haste
She disappeared in a blur
Blending in with the world
And there I was standing
All alone on the curb
But with a smile I left
Without chance of regret
Or what if I spoke
The words my heart said
Still overjoyed with delight
It just wasn't our time
And she was gone from my life
In a blink of an eye
~ JJF ~
Comments (32)
But so are you !
I enjoyed your poem this morning........
Mick.
Well while we're talking Keats, this one just seems to have an element of the "La Belle Dame, Sans Merci" about it. Though a much happier ending I'm glad to say. What did Keats say: "beauty is truth; truth beauty/That is all you need to know and ever will know." Excuse my loose quoting. Nicely done my friend.
Actually it was just in my dreams. ....nice one Jes'
Ken
What a great story and descriptive correlations throughout, loved reading this, nicely penned!
such a beautiful poem & a joy to read