A Soul that Suffereth

This decision of mine, it is not of my choosing...
Nor do I need to explain with false words...
Cast me now into the refiners fire...
The suffering I've endured is absurd...

I will disavow all promises...
As I stand upon the edges of time...
Time that has lied...
Eyes that have cried...
Lies that divide...
My cries are denied...

Torch this wretched product of inhumanity...
Saturate my soul which doth' surely suffereth...
Reverse time, and destroy every last strand of my being...

It is only you Dearest Father...
That is capable of removing me from all of existence...

Do not send me to spirit-worlds...
Do not send me to space...
Remove every last molecule and fiber of my being...
Without leaving a trace...
I wait no longer for Your Eternal frozen flames....
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Posted: Jul 2014
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There can be no pleasure without pain.

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Comments (17)

madtat29
Deep kid...dig it handshake
123whisper
Beautiful poem;well done teddybear
JEANIEMAC
Christian,
I was thinking of emailing you to ask where you had got to...
Don't you dare post poems like this..
The nurse in me will be worried about you.
It's good though...
SnowCoveredMuse
CandyK!

I was wondering where you got too.
powerful write, reminded me
of a quote by Epictetus
(no, I'm not that old)
"do not tie a ship to a
single anchor, nor life to
a single hope"

Miss seeing you around.

SASteddybear
Odette67
Do not send me to spirit worlds...
Do not send me to space...
Remove every last molecule and fiber of my being...
Without leaving a trace...
I wait no longer for your eternal frozen flames....


This is very deep, soul riven, truly excellent poem Christian. hug purple heart
Girlygirl196349
Deep poem happy to see you around missed you my friend teddybear
Girlygirl196349
Deep poem happy to see you around missed you my friend teddybear
paloma66
Very deep and poignant write CK,the soul that suffers knows the the pain.Blessings.purple heart
Joseph1112
Hello CK loved the title and the verse well written, powerful stuff man thanks for sharing c u 'round brother, Jhandshake applause
Mizzy4
Back with a bang ! Christian,
Very strong poem,
Great stuff........Mick.

handshake
Poetnumber1
I truly felt the emotions in this one Christian. A poem with feelings expressed like this was well worth the read. I thought this was sublime.
candykid
Thanks Tony. ...cheers
darkhorse555
heartfelt excellent pen christian i can relate wishing you a blessed beautiful sunday pal angel thumbs up grin
candykid
Thanks Mad.....brought this out of the abyss, as I sadly witness this site a dumping ground of pathetic mindless rambling of so-called "poets."......I should have expected nothing less....cheers
godsprincessonline today!
I too miss my old favorite poets! There seems to be a few filling up the space lately thus shoving everyone to the bottom. The ones who encouraged me the most are gone all because of one person causing problems. Doesn't seem fair - but life isn't fair. Really great poem Christian.

Kathy sad flower teddybear
southmiami4321online today!
Deep-rooted poem.Extreme outburst of strong feelings.
Enjoyed it . Thanks for sharing.
candykid
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