This decision of mine, it is not of my choosing... Nor do I need to explain with false words... Cast me now into the refiners fire... The suffering I've endured is absurd...
I will disavow all promises... As I stand upon the edges of time... Time that has lied... Eyes that have cried... Lies that divide... My cries are denied...
Torch this wretched product of inhumanity... Saturate my soul which doth' surely suffereth... Reverse time, and destroy every last strand of my being...
It is only you Dearest Father... That is capable of removing me from all of existence...
Do not send me to spirit-worlds... Do not send me to space... Remove every last molecule and fiber of my being... Without leaving a trace... I wait no longer for Your Eternal frozen flames....
123whisperMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaJul 27, 2014
Beautiful poem;well done
JEANIEMACLETTERKENNY, Donegal IrelandJul 27, 2014
Christian, I was thinking of emailing you to ask where you had got to... Don't you dare post poems like this.. The nurse in me will be worried about you. It's good though...
I was wondering where you got too. powerful write, reminded me of a quote by Epictetus (no, I'm not that old) "do not tie a ship to a single anchor, nor life to a single hope"
Miss seeing you around.
SAS
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKJul 28, 2014
Do not send me to spirit worlds... Do not send me to space... Remove every last molecule and fiber of my being... Without leaving a trace... I wait no longer for your eternal frozen flames....
This is very deep, soul riven, truly excellent poem Christian.
Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAJul 28, 2014
Deep poem happy to see you around missed you my friend
Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAJul 28, 2014
Deep poem happy to see you around missed you my friend
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandJul 28, 2014
Very deep and poignant write CK,the soul that suffers knows the the pain.Blessings.
Thanks Mad.....brought this out of the abyss, as I sadly witness this site a dumping ground of pathetic mindless rambling of so-called "poets."......I should have expected nothing less....
I too miss my old favorite poets! There seems to be a few filling up the space lately thus shoving everyone to the bottom. The ones who encouraged me the most are gone all because of one person causing problems. Doesn't seem fair - but life isn't fair. Really great poem Christian.
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I was thinking of emailing you to ask where you had got to...
Don't you dare post poems like this..
The nurse in me will be worried about you.
It's good though...
I was wondering where you got too.
powerful write, reminded me
of a quote by Epictetus
(no, I'm not that old)
"do not tie a ship to a
single anchor, nor life to
a single hope"
Miss seeing you around.
SAS
Do not send me to space...
Remove every last molecule and fiber of my being...
Without leaving a trace...
I wait no longer for your eternal frozen flames....
This is very deep, soul riven, truly excellent poem Christian.
Very strong poem,
Great stuff........Mick.
Kathy
Enjoyed it . Thanks for sharing.