it don't matter if your ink don't shine i'm sure the words will read just fine it don't matter if the words don't rhyme its the depth in the words that are sublime it don't matter if the depth is deep for depth is just the spirit you keep and if the spirit is awake not asleep then awakened words could make you weep and when you weep tears are born but tears are not necessarily forlorn for joy abounds to adorn a soul that seeks words that warm if only themselves well that's okay but others also share their say disguised words can sometimes stray but harm is surely a world away.........
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Posted: Aug 2014
About this poem:
everyone has a reason to express themselves .........
a thing well crafted expresses itself in multiple ways,not only for the time of its creation,but across the test of all times and situations.....regards....elo...
Hi Elo ......very nice to hear from you ......believe it or not you came to mind as i was writing this ........i have trouble understanding your writing but i can sense the passion you put into it .....i find it hard to comment on your work for that reason .....thanks for your kind words ....regards Nu
JEANIEMACLETTERKENNY, Donegal IrelandAug 16, 2014
This is such a generous poem. From such a fantastic poet.
Hi, Nuwahri61, ...it don't matter if the words don't rhyme its the depth in the words that are sublime... For someone who writes in free verse more often than not, these are comforting words to read. While the definition of what is considered poetry continues to evolve, and may expand and contract depending on the audience, a soul that seeks words that warm will find them in it don't matter...... Thanks for sharing.
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From such a fantastic poet.
and shall nor drag
what spells of writing
magic at bits and rag
this is simply one of your best .
...it don't matter if the words don't rhyme its the depth in the words that are sublime... For someone who writes in free verse more often than not, these are comforting words to read. While the definition of what is considered poetry continues to evolve, and may expand and contract depending on the audience, a soul that seeks words that warm will find them in it don't matter...... Thanks for sharing.