it don't matter......

it don't matter if your ink don't shine
i'm sure the words will read just fine
it don't matter if the words don't rhyme
its the depth in the words that are sublime
it don't matter if the depth is deep
for depth is just the spirit you keep
and if the spirit is awake not asleep
then awakened words could make you weep
and when you weep tears are born
but tears are not necessarily forlorn
for joy abounds to adorn
a soul that seeks words that warm
if only themselves well that's okay
but others also share their say
disguised words can sometimes stray
but harm is surely a world away.........
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Posted: Aug 2014
About this poem:
everyone has a reason to express themselves .........

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elo69
a thing well crafted expresses itself in multiple ways,not only for the time of its creation,but across the test of all times and situations.....regards....elo... wave
Pancake_
i'll give it a 7 out of 10
Nuwahri61
Hi Elo ......very nice to hear from you ......believe it or not you came to mind as i was writing this ........i have trouble understanding your writing but i can sense the passion you put into it .....i find it hard to comment on your work for that reason .....thanks for your kind words ....regards Nu handshake cheers grin
JEANIEMAC
This is such a generous poem.
From such a fantastic poet.
Nuwahri61
Hi Jeanniemac........thanks .....appreciate your overwhelming comments...much regards....Nugrin
cafetwo2010
Great poem.. great thoughts..wonderful spirit.
professor cool
Nuwahri61
Hey Cafetwo......thanks mate appreciate your thoughts....regards Nu cool
morgen90210
I must comment
and shall nor drag
what spells of writing
magic at bits and rag

this is simply one of your best .
paloma66
Good one Nu,you both look so happy may blessings be yours and OK's always.thumbs up wine teddybear
gnj4u
Hi, Nuwahri61,
...it don't matter if the words don't rhyme its the depth in the words that are sublime... For someone who writes in free verse more often than not, these are comforting words to read. While the definition of what is considered poetry continues to evolve, and may expand and contract depending on the audience, a soul that seeks words that warm will find them in it don't matter...... Thanks for sharing.
darkhorse555
beautifully drawn excellent piece of writing dear friendsangel grin
Nuwahri61
Hey Morgen ........Good to hear from you mate ........Thanks for your thoughts..... much appreciated .....Hope all is well......Regards Nucool
Nuwahri61
Hi Paloma ..........Many thanks for your thoughts and warm blessings for Kathy and I.......Regards Nucool
123whisper
Alway wanted to move in Quensland but flooding issue scares me offwave laugh Very beautiful meaningful poem,love it thumbs up teddybear
Nuwahri61
Hi Joy......Thanks for your thoughts .......very much appreciated ....regards Nucool grin
Nuwahri61
Hi Darkhorse ......Thanks mate appreciate your thoughts .....Regards Nugrin
Nuwahri61
Hi Whisper ........Queensland is a very pretty and diverse state its not all flat he he ....thanks for your comments .....much regards Nugrin
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