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The scent of her warm flesh teased my nose,
Her exotic beauty made my heart swell,
She stood before me in elegant pose,
Irresistible her pungent smell.
 
The taste of ruby wine off her tongue,
Her lipstick how it smeared my face,
Oh! We were wild, so sexy and young,
Our touching now at frantic pace.
 
The candlelight flickered on her long raven mane,
Her hypnotic shadow danced on the wall,
She teased and taunted me insane,
Her frenzied dancing - did stall.
 
Her parted lips begged with pleading moan!
Her hunger growing at desperate speed,
The throb in my loins caused me to groan,
Eager to please her yearning need.
 
Bodies meet, begging for release,
Eager for sweet consummation,
In times oldest dance, whose joys never cease,
Came endless euphoric elation.

Then together we lay there gasping for air,
Our Love bed in a tangled heap,
Inseparable now soft kisses we share,
As we drift off to blissful sleep.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Aug 2014
About this poem:
This poem was conjointly written
by Lady Odette and myself.
May I say it was just pure Heaven
to work with such an eminent
Poeress and such a sexy Lady also.
It is my wish that Christina receives
all the plaudits for this one.

Thanks again dear, being your
Poet friend has enriched my life !

Kindest regards Mick. xxx

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Comments (28)

candykid
What an absolutely gorgeous poem. This is such a super write from two of our most talented poets. You and Christina have outdone yourselves with this one. And a VERY clever title. Nice job both of you, truly a joy to read.cheers thumbs up
cherokyee
Oh, what beauty and talent. Enjoyedyou both...(Mizzy / Odette)hug love
Girlygirl196349
The two of you wrote a beautiful poem together! Love it! hug wave
Girlygirl196349
The two of you wrote a beautiful poem together! Love it! hug wave
Fellsman
Hi Mick

That sounds like the perfect end to a perfect night... irish Super poetry.

Best wishes

Bill wine wine
Odette67
Dear Mick,
the character of a man or woman just can't be hidden in their writing. You are a very passionate man, we have no need for profanity in our poems. Like I said to Bill, it is hot in here tonight, I love it though. You and Bill are very special to me, I don't care who knows it. dancing hug purple heart
Mizzy4
Your special comment is much
appreciated Christian.
Kind regards........Mick.

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Poetnumber1
Breath taking beauty in this one Mick. Well done you both. I loved the smooth transition of thoughts all the way through.
123whisper
Mr Mick and Ms Oddete;fantastic sensual write thumbs up bouquet danceline cartwheelMagical angel2
darkhorse555
truly a delight and very beautiful piece of writing dear friends i tip my hat beautifully pennedangel wine wine
Mizzy4
Many thanks Cherokee,

wave angel
Mizzy4
Thank you for your comment Laura.

hug wine
Mizzy4
Many thanks for your
kind review Bill.

Regards Mick and I'm
sure Christina also.

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diana_1
My my..... I have been many things but this one has left me speechless in it's passion.... and beauty..... Bravo!!!!cheering
Mizzy4
Thank you Mike,
Your kind visit is much
appreciated !

Regards Mick.

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Mizzy4
Dear Christina,
I agree, the heat of close loving
is in the poems today !
Thanks again partner angel

Kind regards Mick.

tip hat dance purple heart
Mizzy4
Thanks for your very positive
review Mustapha,
Regards Mick.

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orientalkoru
A passionate poem by a passionate duo... What a treat! wow thumbs up teddybear
Mizzy4
Thank you Thea,
For your lovely review,
Regards Mick.

balloons angel2 waiter
Mizzy4
Thanks Liam for your
special comment......

beer handshake
Mizzy4
Your lovely comment is
much appreciated Diana.....
Regards Mick.

wave thumbs up
Mizzy4
So glad you enjoyed Kathy,
Thank you for your
Kind review.........Mick.

hug gift
trurorob
Good work you two, it seemed to run seamlessly, nice work.
Rob
Mizzy4
I appreciate your comment
on this one Wayne.

Regards Mick.

cheers
Mizzy4
Thanks for the nice review Rob,
Regards Mick.

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soulgoddess
teddybear Exquisite collaboration between you and Lady Odette!
Hoping everything is well teddybear

angel2 God Blessings!
Fellsman
Hi Mick

When I saw this in the CS tool bar I couldn't help wondering what you are up to, as I haven't seen you around for two or three days.

Hope all is well.

Bill cheers
soulgoddess
A masterpiece that I really adore hug
All the best!
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