Our first kiss

Striking lightening
this love forever pines
away drifting in a desert oasis
an angel's voice sweetly sings
so sweet my unforgettable dream

Inside this you are darling
shining brightest of all stars
liquid silver shivering
the moon begins to weep
starlight crystals winking droplets fall
love you are each one

A beautiful memory
touching so deeply
that i will never forget
as long as i live,
the very first kiss
joining lips breathtaking
with you my love complete
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Aug 2014
About this poem:
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ImagineLove
This is really very loving on "first kiss"!lips

starlight crystals winking droplets fall
love you are each one

Magical! hug
Mizzy4
One hell of a first kiss Liam,
Best wishes
Mick.

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darkhorse555
image thank you so kindly truly wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciatedangel grin
darkhorse555
try my best mick smiling wonderful comment dear friend heartfelt appreciatedangel grin
gnj4u
Hi, darkhorse555,
...starlight crystals winking droplets fall / love you are each one... does capture the magic of the narrator's Our first kiss. Thanks for sharing.
123whisper
Beautiful drown image of complite love thumbs up
darkhorse555
thank you so kindly joy truly wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciatedangel wine
RAVENGYPSY42
Romance Liam draws a sweet gentleness, what a beautiful kiss... bravowine
Fellsman
A tale of romance quite beautifully narrated. A fine write indeed Liam.

Best wishes

Bill cheers
darkhorse555
thea dear friend thank you deeply for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated god bless angel wine
BBMis4me
A very beautiful poem,
I can feel a little touch of sadness. I don't know if I'm wrong, and if is so, please, forgive me, but this is what I perceived, and I liked very much this piece.

Stellangel
darkhorse555
smiling raven wonderful heartfelt comment heartfelt beautiful deeply appreciated dear friendangel grin wine
Odette67
that i will never forget
as long as i live,
the very first kiss
joining lips breathtaking
with you my love complete


So very beautifully romantic Liam. heart beating purple heart
cuttersbinrods
craop uterly rubbish lol
darkhorse555
thank you so very much bill truly beautiful comment dear friend appreciatedangel grin
Girlygirl196349
Just beautiful ! hug cheering wave
darkhorse555
yeah stell your so on the button thank you ever so kindly for the heartfelt beautiful comment appreciated deeply dear friendangel wine
darkhorse555
chrissie thank you dear friend truly very beautiful comment heartfelt appreciatedangel hug grin
darkhorse555
laura thank you kindly dear friend for the truly beautiful comment deeply appreciatedangel grin
darkhorse555
i do not know what to make of that comment mark doh
darkhorse555
cat dear friend thank you dear friend for the heartfelt beautiful comment bless you palangel grin wine
darkhorse555
mm dear pal thank you deeply always a pleasure your beautiful comments heartfelt and may you ink forever flow the treasures from your heart smiling angel grin
godsprincessonline today!
So miss your poems of beauty. Bringing forth a few for new poets to appreciate a real love poem.

Kathy teddybear
angel99999
Hey DH,

Missing... You over here
God bless you always..

angel hug
ladyjewelonline today!
Miss my beautiful poets, you are one, a gentle Gentleman always wine teddybear
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