Striking lightening this love forever pines away drifting in a desert oasis an angel's voice sweetly sings so sweet my unforgettable dream
Inside this you are darling shining brightest of all stars liquid silver shivering the moon begins to weep starlight crystals winking droplets fall love you are each one
A beautiful memory touching so deeply that i will never forget as long as i live, the very first kiss joining lips breathtaking with you my love complete
Hi, darkhorse555, ...starlight crystals winking droplets fall / love you are each one... does capture the magic of the narrator's Our first kiss. Thanks for sharing.
123whisperMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaAug 31, 2014
thea dear friend thank you deeply for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated god bless
BBMis4meHouston, Texas USASep 1, 2014
A very beautiful poem, I can feel a little touch of sadness. I don't know if I'm wrong, and if is so, please, forgive me, but this is what I perceived, and I liked very much this piece.
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starlight crystals winking droplets fall
love you are each one
Magical!
Best wishes
Mick.
...starlight crystals winking droplets fall / love you are each one... does capture the magic of the narrator's Our first kiss. Thanks for sharing.
Best wishes
Bill
I can feel a little touch of sadness. I don't know if I'm wrong, and if is so, please, forgive me, but this is what I perceived, and I liked very much this piece.
Stell
as long as i live,
the very first kiss
joining lips breathtaking
with you my love complete
So very beautifully romantic Liam.
Kathy
Missing... You over here
God bless you always..