Time and Eternity. (Sonnet)

Rejoice today! for life is short my friend,
Seize passing time like gold, whilst you are here,
Dwell in the now, but ne'er on journey's end,
Until such curtain falls, withhold your tear.

Run into natures arms of outstretched boughs,
Behold sweet woodland sounds, much joy they bring,
If still in love, love hard ! renew your vows,
Hold tight that hand, whereon you'd place a ring.

Arise my darling, may I have this dance ?
And we will waltz together round life's floor,
Our eyes transfixed, lost deep in lovers trance,
Just squeeze me close, be mine for evermore.

When life's last failing breaths are short and few,
My final fading thought will be of you !
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Sep 2014
About this poem:
A positive, romantic take on
a subject that can be dark and
regretful !

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Comments (26)

trurorob
Very good, certainly you and Bill are the Kings of sonnets on here, mind you Phil can write a mean one as well.
Rob
Fellsman
Hi Mick

A message for us all in this technically flawless sonnet - Rejoice today indeed! Life sure is on a shorthold lease - a lesson we tend to learn a little too late as we stumble through the myriad of slings and arrows we encounter along the way.

A fine write buddy.

Bill cheers
Nuwahri61
Nice write and great sentiments Mick ..........Thanks head banger
RAVENGYPSY42
BEAUTIFUL MICK... "SEIZE PASSING TIME LIKE GOLD, WHILST YOU ARE HERE," LOVED THIS.. BEAUTY BORN MY FRIEND
BLESSINGS
AMY- RAVENGYPSY wine
marikia
"Flawless" - can't agree more. Well done, dear poet, well done! I am lost for words, left speechless and thanking you with all my heart! wine bouquet
ladygwen123
What a wondeful'last thought" Filling one's last thoughts with the picture of one so loved that we devoted all that time to. simply for love Yet not simple! I've written only one sonnet and that was of Ireland crying out for me to do so.This is absolutely beautiful almost to the point of Sacred. How lucky they were yours and mine to be loved in such a way. I guess we are the Searchers.. my eyes watered my voice held a tear. Thank you for string a multitude of feelings in me.


Barbara
darkhorse555
mick truly outstanding beautifully penned piece mick loved this pieceangel thumbs up
gnj4u
Hi, Mizzy4,
Arise my darling, may I have this dance ? And we will waltz together round life's floor... It could be argued that there is no better way to go through life than dancing - and writing verse, of course, especially sonnets. Thank you for sharing yours.
candykid
Top poem Mick. Truly a gorgeous piece of work. I cannot write this style but I love it.......thumbs up cheers
Odette67
Beautiful as ever Mick. wine purple heart
Mizzy4
Thank you Rob,
I feel honoured by your
nice review.
Regards Mick.

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Mizzy4
Thanks for your kindness Bill,
The right time is always now......

Regards Mick.


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123whisper
Wowow this poem enlighten my day and thoughts,thank youapplause cheering teddybear
Poetnumber1
A class piece Mick. Very well penned.
Mizzy4
Thanks Nu ! thumbs up
Mizzy4
Always a pleasure Amy !

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Mizzy4
You're most welcome Marikia,
I appreciate your special review !

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Mizzy4
I'm so glad you liked
this Barbara,
Thank you !

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Mizzy4
Your lovely comment is much
appreciated Liam.

cheers thumbs up
Mizzy4
Thank you Joy,
For your lovely comment !

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Mizzy4
Many thanks Christian,
Your review is always
Appreciated......

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Mizzy4
Always lovely to hear from
you Christina.
Thank you !

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SCatlyn
Love this write on this subject rose rose rose
Mizzy4
Very grateful for your lovely comment Thea.

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Mizzy4
Thank you M,
For your lovely review.

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Mizzy4
Cheers SCatlyn,
Glad you enjoyed !

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